Dec. 16, 2021
First journal
As far as I remember, I haven’t decorated and kept a diary since high school. So, It’s my first time keeping a diary in about 15 years, and keeping an English diary (even in cursive letters!) is the first time in my whole life.
And I’m loving it!! I’m so happy that I finally found a hobby than I can be really into. Although I’m not good at decorating things, I find it so enjoyable now.
Also, I feel like having moments to reflect today and think about myself to be a better person makes my day valuable.
I didn’t expect this, but after I decorated my diary, I realized the mood of today’s diary doesn’t fit December actually... It’s too pinky suitable for spring.. lol
But this is my first try, so I feel okay with it. I’m going to do it better. The only thing I need to do is keep doing this!
First journal
As far as I remember, I haven’t decorated and kept a diary since high school.
What exactly did you mean by "decorating" here? Could you clarify?
So, I it’s my first time keeping a diary in about 15 years, and keeping an English diary (even in cursive letters!) is thea first time in my whole liffor me.
"in my whole life" is a redundant expression here.
And I’m loving it!!
I’m so happy that I finally found a hobby than I can be really into.
Although I’m not good at decorating things, I find it so enjoyable now.
Also, I feel like having moments to reflect today and thinking about myselfhow to be a better person makes my day valuableis valuable for my day.
"makes my day valuable" doesn't sound that natural.
I didn’t expect this, but after I decorated my diary, I realized the mood of today’s diary doesn’tdoesn’t really/quite fit December actually... It’s too pinky-ish, more suitable for spring.. lol
But this is my first try, so I feel okay with it.
I’m going to do it better.
Adding "in the future" or 'eventually' at the end might've made it sound more natural.
The only thing I need to do is keep doing this!
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Overall, another really nicely-written diary! There was almost no grammar mistakes and the style really is quite native. If I hadn't known, I might've mistaken you for one :D
Dec. 16, 2021
As far as I remember, I haven’t decorated and kept a diary since high school.
I do appreciate for your time:) I actually wrote this down on my diary I decorated with stickers or something
Dec. 17, 2021
Ahh, I see
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As far as I remember, I haven’t decorated and kept a diary since high school. As far as I remember, I haven’t decorated and kept a diary since high school. What exactly did you mean by "decorating" here? Could you clarify? |
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So, It’s my first time keeping a diary in about 15 years, and keeping an English diary (even in cursive letters!) is the first time in my whole life. So "in my whole life" is a redundant expression here. |
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And I’m loving it!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m so happy that I finally found a hobby than I can be really into. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although I’m not good at decorating things, I find it so enjoyable now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, I feel like having moments to reflect today and think about myself to be a better person makes my day valuable. Also, I feel like having moments to reflect today and thinking about "makes my day valuable" doesn't sound that natural. |
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I didn’t expect this, but after I decorated my diary, I realized the mood of today’s diary doesn’t fit December actually... It’s too pinky suitable for spring.. lol I didn’t expect this, but after I decorated my diary, I realized the mood |
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But this is my first try, so I feel okay with it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m going to do it better. I’m going to do it better. Adding "in the future" or 'eventually' at the end might've made it sound more natural. |
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The only thing I need to do is keep doing this! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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