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simontw

Oct. 4, 2020

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大家好, 我是simon, 我 住在Taiwan今年开始写中文自己学习
我 要写和说比较好


I am simon living in Taiwan. I just started learning to write this year and need to improve my writing and speaking.

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First Journal

you could write; 我第一天的日记

大家好, 我是simon, 我 住在Taiwan今年开始写中文自己学习自学中文。

我是simon, I am Simon
我叫simon, my name is Simon
Those sentences are similar mean, which introduces you to others in Chinese. Don't have a huge difference.

Taiwan
Chinese [ simple] ; 台湾

自学中文 more simple and make sense
you words I translate in English. you can feel it where the mistake.
I write Chinese, I study by myself.
I suggest;今年我自学中文
I study Chinese by myself.

我 要写和说比较好

I don't understand this one.
maybe you can write what you want to say in English to me.

Feedback

I type the simple Chinese. Maybe you could google translate in traditional one.

大家好, 我是simon,住在Taiwan。我今年开始写中文自己学习自学中文。

要写和说比较好想做到能写会说。

Feedback

Come on, your goal will be achieved soon.

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simontw

Oct. 4, 2020

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Many thanks for your corrections. Super helpful.

First Journal


First Journal

you could write; 我第一天的日记

大家好, 我是simon, 我 住在Taiwan今年开始写中文自己学习


大家好, 我是simon,住在Taiwan。我今年开始写中文自己学习自学中文。

大家好, 我是simon, 我 住在Taiwan今年开始写中文自己学习自学中文。

我是simon, I am Simon 我叫simon, my name is Simon Those sentences are similar mean, which introduces you to others in Chinese. Don't have a huge difference. Taiwan Chinese [ simple] ; 台湾 自学中文 more simple and make sense you words I translate in English. you can feel it where the mistake. I write Chinese, I study by myself. I suggest;今年我自学中文 I study Chinese by myself.

我 要写和说比较好


要写和说比较好想做到能写会说。

我 要写和说比较好

I don't understand this one. maybe you can write what you want to say in English to me.

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