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Title so all important words need to start with a capital letter.

It' was so hard to do itchoose. It was so hard to choose.

It' was so hard to do it. It was so hard.

You would want to use the past tense, since this story happened yesterday. Also, the "to do it" part is slightly redundant, so you can omit it :)

It's so hard to do it. It's so hard.

It's so hard to do it. It's so hard to do.

Don't need "it".

I usreviewed many kinds of resources, but so many men, so many mindpeople had very different opinions. I reviewed many resources, but people had very different opinions.

I used many kinds of resources, but so many men, so many mindpeople had different opinions. I used many kinds of resources, but so many people had different opinions.

I understood what you meant by "many men, many minds", but I thought I'd provide a more common/widely understood phrasing.

I used many kinds of resources, but so many men,there were so many mindopinions. I used many kinds of resources, but there were so many opinions.

I used many kinds of resources, but so many men, so many mindthere are so many different opinions. I used many resources, but there are so many different opinions.

Probably don't need "kind of". So many men, so many minds is not a saying we would use in English.

One person says that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and the other talksays that another guitar is better. One person says that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and the other says that another guitar is better.

One person says that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and the other talksays that anothe guitar is better. One person says that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and the other says that another is better.

When quoting someone, be sure to use the verb "to say" instead of "to talk."

One person saysid that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and the while another talks that about how another guitar is better. One person said that this guitar is suitable for beginners while another talks about how another guitar is better.

One person says that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and the another talksays that the guitar is better. One person says that this guitar is suitable for beginners, and another says that guitar is better.

That already talks about a specific guitar you don't need the.

I wanna choose just a good thingguitar: not cool, not professional, just goodsuitable for a beginner teachingo learn. I want a good guitar: not cool, not professional, just suitable for a beginner to learn.

I just wanna choose just a good thingone: not cool, not professional, just good for beginner teachings. I just wanna choose a good one: not cool, not professional, just good for beginners.

When referring to a specific type of object that's already been made clear (in this case, a guitar), say "one" instead of "thing." "Beginner teaching" would imply that you're the teacher, whereas if you're learning on your own, where as "one for beginners" shows that you're teaching yourself.

I wannat to choose just a good thingone: not cool, not professional, just good for beginner tleachrning. I want to choose a good one: not cool, not professional, just good for beginner learning.

I wannajust want to choose just a good thingone: not cool, not professional, just good for a beginner teaching. I just want to choose a good one: not cool, not professional, just good for a beginner.

wanna is slang not what you would use to write normally. Good thing not correct expression here. At end think "just good for a beginner" sounds better.