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First Full Moon in Lunar Calendar

Today is a traditional holiday in Korea, so called "정월대보름" (First full moon of January in Lunar calendar)

The most special thing is that we eat five-grain rice that made with a mixture of sticky rice, millet, sorghum, red bean and black bean.

Before COVID-19, we used to cross a bridge and made a wish watching the full moon.

I liked watching the moon, so the event of crossing a bridge was my favorite.

I hope I will be able to the event next year.

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First Full Moon inon the Lunar Calendar

Today is a traditional holiday in Korea, so called "정월대보름" (Fthe first full moon of January inon the Lunar calendar)

The most special thing is that wewe do during this holiday is eat five-grain rice that, made with a mixture of sticky rice, millet, sorghum, red beans and black beans.

Before COVID-19, we used towould cross a bridge and madke a wish while watching the full moon.

I changed the tenses here to sound more natural in English.

I liked watching the moon, so the event ofbridge crossing a bridge waevent is my favorite.

I changed the tense from past tense to present tense here.

I hope I will be able to attend the event next year.

"Attend" or "go to" can both work here.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 15, 2022

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First Full Moon in the Lunar Calendar

Today is a traditional holiday in Korea, so called "정월대보름" (FThe first full moon of January in the Lunar calendar)

The most special thingWhat is specific for this holiday is that we eat five-grain rice that is made with a mixture of sticky rice, millet, sorghum, red beans and black beans.

You can also start with "The traditional dish for this holiday is..."

Before COVID-19, we used to cross a bridge and madke a wish while watching the full moon.

I liked watching the moon, so the event of crossing athe bridge was my favorite.

The bridge was already mentioned

I hope I will be able to attend the event next year.

Stylistically I would maybe say "I hope that we will be able to take fulfill all parts of the tradition next year" or something like this

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Minor corrections, well done!

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 15, 2022

402

Thank you so much!

First Full Moon in Lunar Calendar


First Full Moon in the Lunar Calendar

First Full Moon inon the Lunar Calendar

Today is a traditional holiday in Korea, so called "정월대보름" (First full moon of January in Lunar calendar)


Today is a traditional holiday in Korea, so called "정월대보름" (FThe first full moon of January in the Lunar calendar)

Today is a traditional holiday in Korea, so called "정월대보름" (Fthe first full moon of January inon the Lunar calendar)

The most special thing is that we eat five-grain rice that made with a mixture of sticky rice, millet, sorghum, red bean and black bean.


The most special thingWhat is specific for this holiday is that we eat five-grain rice that is made with a mixture of sticky rice, millet, sorghum, red beans and black beans.

You can also start with "The traditional dish for this holiday is..."

The most special thing is that wewe do during this holiday is eat five-grain rice that, made with a mixture of sticky rice, millet, sorghum, red beans and black beans.

Before COVID-19, we used to cross a bridge and made a wish watching the full moon.


Before COVID-19, we used to cross a bridge and madke a wish while watching the full moon.

Before COVID-19, we used towould cross a bridge and madke a wish while watching the full moon.

I changed the tenses here to sound more natural in English.

I liked watching the moon, so the event of crossing a bridge was my favorite.


I liked watching the moon, so the event of crossing athe bridge was my favorite.

The bridge was already mentioned

I liked watching the moon, so the event ofbridge crossing a bridge waevent is my favorite.

I changed the tense from past tense to present tense here.

I hope I will be able to the event next year.


I hope I will be able to attend the event next year.

Stylistically I would maybe say "I hope that we will be able to take fulfill all parts of the tradition next year" or something like this

I hope I will be able to attend the event next year.

"Attend" or "go to" can both work here.

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