Nov. 21, 2022
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Hi there. I have been living in the UK for 5 years already, but oftentimes I feel like my English could be better. Yesterday, I visited some friends I have known for a long time. They both are able to speak very fluently, virtually flawlessly. It made me jealous, I felt my English was clumsy and I wasn't able to articulate or say what I wanted without throwing in many grammatical mistakes. I hope that writing down my thoughts will somehow help me out.
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Hi there.
I have been living in the UK for 5 years already, but oftentimes I feel like my English could be better.
Yesterday, I visited some friends I have known for a long time.
They both are able to speak very fluently, virtually flawlessly.
It made me jealous,. I felt as if my English wasere clumsy and I wasn't able to articulate or say what I wanted without throwing in many grammatical mistakes.
"I felt as if my English were clumsy" is subjunctive case because none of us really know whether your English really is clumsy. You sound very fluent to me!
"articulate" and "say" mean the same thing so I removed one.
I hope that writing down my thoughts will somehow help me out.
"help me out" is slang. It's okay but here's another way to write it.
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I have been living in the UK for 5 years already, but oftentimes I feel like my English could be better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday, I visited some friends I have known for a long time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They both are able to speak very fluently, virtually flawlessly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It made me jealous, I felt my English was clumsy and I wasn't able to articulate or say what I wanted without throwing in many grammatical mistakes. It made me jealous "I felt as if my English were clumsy" is subjunctive case because none of us really know whether your English really is clumsy. You sound very fluent to me! "articulate" and "say" mean the same thing so I removed one. |
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I hope that writing down my thoughts will somehow help me out. I hope that writing down my thoughts will somehow help me "help me out" is slang. It's okay but here's another way to write it. |
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I am not sure what to write about yet, so I will just talk about my daily stuff or maybe stories about myself. |
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