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hello. it is my first passage in this platform. I want to improve my English . firstly what must I do
hHello.
Welcome! Just correcting your capitalization, which isn't strictly necessary for an online forum like this.
itThis is my first passage ion this platform.
I would specify "this" rather than use the more general "it" in this case.
Prepositions are tricky in every language. We say "on this platform," though I don't think there's a strict rule to explain why.
I want to improve my English .
fFirstly what must I do?
This might sound more natural as "What should I do first?"
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first article |
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hello.
Welcome! Just correcting your capitalization, which isn't strictly necessary for an online forum like this. |
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it is my first passage in this platform.
I would specify "this" rather than use the more general "it" in this case. Prepositions are tricky in every language. We say "on this platform," though I don't think there's a strict rule to explain why. |
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I want to improve my English . I want to improve my English |
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firstly what must I do
This might sound more natural as "What should I do first?" |
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