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I had a first Arhue with a project manager.
We disagreed about delivery method. It was a really deep talking, because he has not experience as a developer, so he did not know why we has different workflow.
In my opionon this situation pointed that developer and a project manager too closer to each other, this closes casues damaged in product.
We wanted a best for the company, but we have a differen approches in this situation.
First Argue oment On mMy jJob
Proper capitalization in your title.
I think what you meant is argument.
I had amy first Arhueargument with a project manager.
“my first argument” sounds more natural than “a first argue.”
We disagreed about the delivery method.
Add “the” before “delivery method” for proper article usage.
It was a really deep talkingdiscussion, because he hadoes not have experience as a developer, so he did not know why we hasve a different workflow.
“discussion” for natural phrasing.
“does not have experience” for natural phrasing.
“we have” for subject-verb agreement.
In my opionion, this situation pointshowed that the developer and athe project manager were too closer to each other, this closes casues damaged into the product.
Spelling correction for "opinion."
“showed that”, “too close”, “this closeness caused damage” for natural phrasing.
We wanted athe best for the company, but we have a different approaches in this situation.
“the best.” for natural phrasing.
“different approaches” is the correct spelling.
Past tense “had” matches the situation described.
Feedback
Corrections are mostly about spelling, verb tense, and smoother phrasing. Good job, keep writing! 🤍
First Argue on my jment on the Job
I had amy first Arhuegument with a project manager.
We disagreed about delivery method.
It was a really deep talkingconversation, because he has not experience as a developer, so he did not know why we hasve different workflow.
I don't think "deep" is the word you want to use here. Deep would suggest that you delved into fine details. A deep conversation would be one where you really understand the other side and broaden your perspectives.
In my opionion, this situation pointedut that developer and a project manager too closer to each other, twhis closes casues damaged inch caused damages with the product.
We wanted athe best for the company, but we have a different approaches into this situation.
We never use "a" with something plural.
First Argue on my jobment at My Work
- Argue comes from the verb 'to argue' but 'argument' is the noun to describe that a dispute happened
- job is quite casual, the word work fits better here
- You are always 'at' work never on 'work'
I had amy first Arhueargument with a project manager.
We disagreed about my delivery method.
- I presume you are talking about you're delivery method so added 'my' otherwise it's unclear what exactly you are talking about
It was a really deep talkingconversation, because he has not experience as a developer, so he did not know why we hasve different workflows.
- Either 'has no experience...' or 'has not had experience...'
- Conjugations are I have, you have, he/she has, we have, they have -> need to use have not has because you are using we not he/she
- Because you are talking about two people, there are two workflows so workflow needs to be plural
In my opionion this situation pointedhighlights that the developer and a project manager are working too closer to each other, and this closes casues damaged in productproximity disrupts each others work.
- It was a bit unclear what you were trying to say so I did my best to rewrite it with what I thought you were trying to say. Let me know in comments if this wasn't what you were trying to say though
We wanted aboth want the best for the company, but we have a different approaches into this situation.
- Wanted is the past tense but I presume you both currently still want what is best for the company
- fixed some minor spelling
Feedback
Mostly understandable, just pay attention to spelling and conjugations :)
First Argue onment about my jJob
I had a first Arhuegument with a project manager.
We disagreed about the delivery method.
It was a really deep talking, because he has not experienced as a developer, so he did not know why we has different workflow.
In my opionion this situation pointed that developer and a project manager too closer to each other, this closes casuses damaged in product.
We wanted a best for the company, but we have a different approaches in this situation.
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First Argue on my job First Argu First Argu - Argue comes from the verb 'to argue' but 'argument' is the noun to describe that a dispute happened - job is quite casual, the word work fits better here - You are always 'at' work never on 'work' First Argu First Argu Proper capitalization in your title. I think what you meant is argument. |
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I had a first Arhue with a project manager. I had a first Ar I had I had I had “my first argument” sounds more natural than “a first argue.” |
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We disagreed about delivery method. We disagreed about the delivery method. We disagreed about my delivery method. - I presume you are talking about you're delivery method so added 'my' otherwise it's unclear what exactly you are talking about This sentence has been marked as perfect! We disagreed about the delivery method. Add “the” before “delivery method” for proper article usage. |
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It was a really deep talking, because he has not experience as a developer, so he did not know why we has different workflow. It was a really deep talking, because he has not experienced as a developer, so he did not know why we has different workflow. It was a really deep - Either 'has no experience...' or 'has not had experience...' - Conjugations are I have, you have, he/she has, we have, they have -> need to use have not has because you are using we not he/she - Because you are talking about two people, there are two workflows so workflow needs to be plural It was a really deep I don't think "deep" is the word you want to use here. Deep would suggest that you delved into fine details. A deep conversation would be one where you really understand the other side and broaden your perspectives. It was a really deep “discussion” for natural phrasing. “does not have experience” for natural phrasing. “we have” for subject-verb agreement. |
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In my opionon this situation pointed that developer and a project manager too closer to each other, this closes casues damaged in product. In my opi In my opi - It was a bit unclear what you were trying to say so I did my best to rewrite it with what I thought you were trying to say. Let me know in comments if this wasn't what you were trying to say though In my opi In my opi Spelling correction for "opinion." “showed that”, “too close”, “this closeness caused damage” for natural phrasing. |
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We wanted a best for the company, but we have a differen approches in this situation. We wanted a best for the company, but we have a different approaches in this situation. We - Wanted is the past tense but I presume you both currently still want what is best for the company - fixed some minor spelling We wanted We never use "a" with something plural. We wanted “the best.” for natural phrasing. “different approaches” is the correct spelling. Past tense “had” matches the situation described. |
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