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alexwong2164

Sept. 27, 2020

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first airlines restaurant tokyo

Are you regular first-class flying user?

If the answer is “yes”, please adding me to your FB, Instagram…

I am 53 now, I don’t think in this life will take a flight with first class service.

Not even business class…sad!

Thanks to Japan.

Now, I can try the first-class flying experience without pay the first-class ticket price.

Actually, first time when I hear such idea. (VR tour)

I was laughing and think that won’t work.

But now when I watch the video, I did change my mind.

Next time when I go to Tokyo, I will try this restaurant.

If you already tried, please do tell me what is your experience.

Corrections

AreDo you regularly fly first- class flying user?

If the answer is “yes”, please adding me to your FB, Instagram…

"I am 53 now, I don’t think in this life will take a flight with first class serviceI'll take a first class flight in this life."¶

or¶

"I am 53 now. I don't think I'll be able to take a first class flight in this life."¶
This sentence sounds the most natural
.

NoI can't even fly business class... it's so sad!

Thanks to Japan.

NowThanks to Japan, I can try the first-class flying experience without paying the first-class ticket price.

Actually, the first time when I hear such ideaI heard about "VR tours", I was laughing and thought it would not work.

(VR tour)

I was laughing and think that won’t work.

I put the last two corrections into a single sentence.

"But now, when I have watched the video, I didhave changed my mind."¶

or¶

"But after I watched the video, I
changed my mind.

Both of these sentences work.

N"The next time when I go to Tokyo, I will try this restaurant.

or¶

"I will try this restaurant the next time I go to Tokyo."¶
This sentence sounds more natural, but both work.

If you've already tried it out, please do tell me what isabout your experience.

first airlines restaurant tokyo


Are you regular first-class flying user?


AreDo you regularly fly first- class flying user?

If the answer is “yes”, please adding me to your FB, Instagram…


If the answer is “yes”, please adding me to your FB, Instagram…

I am 53 now, I don’t think in this life will take a flight with first class service.


"I am 53 now, I don’t think in this life will take a flight with first class serviceI'll take a first class flight in this life."¶

or¶

"I am 53 now. I don't think I'll be able to take a first class flight in this life."¶
This sentence sounds the most natural
.

Not even business class…sad!


NoI can't even fly business class... it's so sad!

Thanks to Japan.


Thanks to Japan.

Now, I can try the first-class flying experience without pay the first-class ticket price.


NowThanks to Japan, I can try the first-class flying experience without paying the first-class ticket price.

Actually, first time when I hear such idea.


Actually, the first time when I hear such ideaI heard about "VR tours", I was laughing and thought it would not work.

(VR tour)


(VR tour)

I was laughing and think that won’t work.


I was laughing and think that won’t work.

I put the last two corrections into a single sentence.

But now when I watch the video, I did change my mind.


"But now, when I have watched the video, I didhave changed my mind."¶

or¶

"But after I watched the video, I
changed my mind.

Both of these sentences work.

Next time when I go to Tokyo, I will try this restaurant.


N"The next time when I go to Tokyo, I will try this restaurant.

or¶

"I will try this restaurant the next time I go to Tokyo."¶
This sentence sounds more natural, but both work.

If you already tried, please do tell me what is your experience.


If you've already tried it out, please do tell me what isabout your experience.

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