Hello, peopleveryone.

“Hello, people” sounds really odd, in some cases rude depending on the tone (English is dumb, I know), and it’s better to say “Hello, everyone”

This is my first time doing thiswriting on here.

You haven’t explained what you’re doing for the first time, so it’s better to be more specific

I'm bad inat english.

And my english is vaery basic, but I try to do this.’m t trying.

I really want to improve my english, specifically my Wwriting and grammar skills.

Please, be goodnice.

“Please, be good” means to tell someone to have good behavior

First Post

Hello, peopl everyone.

Hello people makes sense but sounds a bit odd

I'm bad inat english.

And mMy english is vaery basic but I try to do thisam trying to work on it.

I really want to improve my english, especially my Wwriting and grammar skills.

Please, be gookind.

Hello, peopleveryone.

This is my first time doing thisa post.

Don’t use “this” as the object here

I'm bad in eat English.

AndThough my english is vaery basic but, I try to do thisimprove.

Be more specific instead of using “do this”. What are you trying to do?

I really want to improve my english, especially my Wwriting and grammar skills.