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kazu

June 11, 2020

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Fireflies

I went to see fireflies with my girlfriend last weekend. However, we could see only a few of them. Though it was a shame, it was neat that we could see beautiful stars and immerse ourselves in cool and crisp air. We'll be sure to wanna see a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

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Fireflies

I went to see fireflies with my girlfriend last weekend.

However, we could see only a few of them.

TAlthough ithat was a shame, it was neat that we could see beautiful stars and immerse ourselves in cool and crisp air.

We'll be sure to wanna hope to see a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

Fireflies are so fun! I hope you get to see more of them. Nice entry.

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kazu

June 12, 2020

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Thanks!

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Fireflies

I went to see fireflies with my girlfriend last weekend.

However, we could see only a few of them.

We'll be sure to wanna see a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

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kazu

June 12, 2020

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Thx!

Fireflies

I went to see fireflies with my girlfriend last weekend.

However, we could see only a few of them.

TEven though it was a shame, it was neatice that we could see beautiful stars and immerse ourselves in the cool and crisp air.

Using the words "though" and "neat" would be a slang.

We'll be sure to wannaly have seen a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

I'm not sure i understand your sentence correctly, since you included the word "want" in it.

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gasperus

June 11, 2020

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Good Job!

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kazu

June 12, 2020

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Thanks for your correction!

Fireflies


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I went to see fireflies with my girlfriend last weekend.


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However, we could see only a few of them.


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Though it was a shame, it was neat that we could see beautiful stars and immerse ourselves in cool and crisp air.


TEven though it was a shame, it was neatice that we could see beautiful stars and immerse ourselves in the cool and crisp air.

Using the words "though" and "neat" would be a slang.

TAlthough ithat was a shame, it was neat that we could see beautiful stars and immerse ourselves in cool and crisp air.

We'll be sure to wanna see a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.


We'll be sure to wannaly have seen a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

I'm not sure i understand your sentence correctly, since you included the word "want" in it.

We'll be sure to wanna see a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

We'll be sure to wanna hope to see a lot of fireflies by the end of the year.

Fireflies are so fun! I hope you get to see more of them. Nice entry.

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