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Fire at school

There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears. This sound went after her everywhere. It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of them. She knew when and why it appeared.
When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a fire alarm. But it didn't make her anxious. Instead of that, she left a dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.
It ringed so loud, that Elena thought, she would never able to hear anymore. She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.
Elena thought, that she was alone in the building. However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes. Kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm. Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a fire.
As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived. There was a fire in one of the classes . Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire. Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.

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There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears.

This sound went afterfollowed her everywhere.

It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of ithem.

Sound= singular

When she had awas having lunch after her classes rang out, a fire alarm. started to ring.

Instead of that, she left athe dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.

It rianged so loud, that Elena thought, that she would never able to hear anymore.

She made sure, that the alarm was not broken/spoilt and hurried up to leave the school.

Elena thought, that she was alone in the building.

KThe kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.

Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a firethere must have been a fire in the building.

Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire.

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ksushalev

Nov. 10, 2022

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Thanks a lot

Fire at the school

There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears.

This sound went afterfollowed her everywhere.

It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of ithem.

She knew when and why it appeared.

When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a, the fire alarm. rang.

But it didn't make her anxious.

Instead of that, she left athe dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.

It rianged so loud, that Elena thought, she would never be able to hear anymore.gain.

She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.

Elena thought, that she was alone in the building.

However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes.

KThese kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.

Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be startedthere may be a fire.

As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived.

There was a fire in one of the classes .

Something washad burst in the laboratory and caused athe fire.

Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.

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ksushalev

Nov. 10, 2022

0

Thanks

Fire at school


Fire at the school

There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears.


There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears.

There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears.

This sound went after her everywhere.


This sound went afterfollowed her everywhere.

This sound went afterfollowed her everywhere.

It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of them.


It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of ithem.

It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of ithem.

Sound= singular

She knew when and why it appeared.


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When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a fire alarm.


When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a, the fire alarm. rang.

When she had awas having lunch after her classes rang out, a fire alarm. started to ring.

But it didn't make her anxious.


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Instead of that, she left a dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.


Instead of that, she left athe dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.

Instead of that, she left athe dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.

It ringed so loud, that Elena thought, she would never able to hear anymore.


It rianged so loud, that Elena thought, she would never be able to hear anymore.gain.

It rianged so loud, that Elena thought, that she would never able to hear anymore.

She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.


She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.

She made sure, that the alarm was not broken/spoilt and hurried up to leave the school.

Elena thought, that she was alone in the building.


Elena thought, that she was alone in the building.

Elena thought, that she was alone in the building.

However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.


KThese kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.

KThe kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm.

Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a fire.


Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be startedthere may be a fire.

Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a firethere must have been a fire in the building.

As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was a fire in one of the classes .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire.


Something washad burst in the laboratory and caused athe fire.

Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire.

Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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