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Finished a book in English

I finished a book in English.
This book was Harry Potter third chapter.
I've read it on my native language before.
I feel so proud of myself.
As soon as i finished it, i started the next chapter.
I try to read 6-8 side per day.

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Finished a bBook in English

Proper capitalization in your title.

This book was Harry Potter third chapthe third chapter of Harry Potter.

"the third chapter of Harry Potter." Correct word order.

I've read it oin my native language before.

"in my native language" Correct preposition.

As soon as iI finished it, iI started the next chapter.

Capitalize I.

I try to read 6-8 sidepages per day.

"pages" Correct word for books.

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Corrections are mostly about word choice, grammar details, and capitalization. Good job, keep writing!

Finishing a book that's not in your native language is definitely an achievement. You're amazing!

Finished a book in English

This book was Harry Potter third chapter.the third book in the Harry Potter series.¶
This book was the third one in the Harry Potter series.¶

There are seven books in the Harry Potter series. I'm guessing you finished the third book.
A chapter is a part of a book. Each book has many chapters.

As soon as i finished it, i started the next chapterbook.

This would be book four in the series, or the fourth book in the series.

I try to read 6-8 sidepages per day.

We use the word "pages" for books. The pages are numbered. (We also use "pages" for newspapers, magazines, and documents that are written on a computer that can be printed on pieces of paper.)

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Good job!
The third book in the series is Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban. You could include the title to help readers remember which book it was.

Finished a book in English

I finished a book in English.

This book was Harry Potter's third chapter.

I've read it oin my native language before.

I feel so proud of myself.

As soon as i finished it, i started the next chapter.

I try to read 6-8 sidepages per day.

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Good job finishing a book!

Finished a book in English


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Finished a book in English

Finished a bBook in English

Proper capitalization in your title.

I finished a book in English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This book was Harry Potter third chapter.


This book was Harry Potter's third chapter.

This book was Harry Potter third chapter.the third book in the Harry Potter series.¶
This book was the third one in the Harry Potter series.¶

There are seven books in the Harry Potter series. I'm guessing you finished the third book. A chapter is a part of a book. Each book has many chapters.

This book was Harry Potter third chapthe third chapter of Harry Potter.

"the third chapter of Harry Potter." Correct word order.

I've read it on my native language before.


I've read it oin my native language before.

I've read it oin my native language before.

"in my native language" Correct preposition.

I feel so proud of myself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As soon as i finished it, i started the next chapter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As soon as i finished it, i started the next chapterbook.

This would be book four in the series, or the fourth book in the series.

As soon as iI finished it, iI started the next chapter.

Capitalize I.

I try to read 6-8 side per day.


I try to read 6-8 sidepages per day.

I try to read 6-8 sidepages per day.

We use the word "pages" for books. The pages are numbered. (We also use "pages" for newspapers, magazines, and documents that are written on a computer that can be printed on pieces of paper.)

I try to read 6-8 sidepages per day.

"pages" Correct word for books.

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