Aug. 15, 2021
Actually, I have been losting my goal of life, so I am trying to find a new goal for living better and happier.
A YouTube said, if you want to live your own life you need to select one goal based on what my interest and my strength.
I know what is my interest.
I like learning something new, writing notes, teaching something and drinking tea.
But I don't know exactly what is my strength.
For a week, I have been thinking about what my strength is.
Today, I found one thing that I can do something continuously.
For example, I have strived my morning routines for 2 years.
I have three records of days in a row on this site, kindle and Duolinggo app.
I have written my journal for 9 years.
At this time, I have a homework to combine my strength and my interests.
I don't know what it will come, but I will do my best about it.
Finding My Goal
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I think this might be what you meant?
A YouTuber said, if you want to live your own life you need to select one goal based on what myyour interests and my strengths.
Assuming you mean the person who made videos on Youtube.
It sounds weird to talk about "my interest" and "my strength" - we all have many interests and strengths, so it's not clear which one you mean. You could say something like "my biggest strength" or "my fondest interest".
I know what is my interests are.
I like learning somenew thing news, writing notes, teaching something and drinking tea.
"teaching people things" would've been okay, but we can just say "teaching".
But I don't know exactly what is mymy biggest strength is.
For a week, I have been thinking about what my strength isit.
But a little more natural as "I have been thinking about it for a week."
Today, I found one thing: that I can do something continuously.
Need some form of punctuation here. Many would work but a colon feels best.
For example, I have strivedn to keep my morning routines for 2 years.
"strive" is a difficult word to use. "striven" and "strived" are, in fact, both valid forms for the past participle - but here "strived" sounds really bad to my ear. I don't think there's any rules about it, sometimes one form or another just sounds better.
Regardless, you have to strive to *do* something.
I have three records of days in a row on this site, kindle and Duolinggo app.
Unclear exactly what you want to express here. Just "I am keeping a streak going on each of these three platforms"?
I have written my journal for 9 years.
At this time,So, now I have a homework - to combine my strength and my interests.
Here "my strength" is fine because it's referring back to the earlier change I made "my biggest strength".
I don't know what it will come to me, but I will do my best about itto think of something.
Had to guess at your meaning here.
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It sounds like your strength might be discipline, which is a very useful strength indeed :)
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Actually, I have been losting my goal of life, so I am trying to find a new goal for living better and happier. Actually, I have been I think this might be what you meant? |
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I know what is my interest. I know what |
I like learning something new, writing notes, teaching something and drinking tea. I like learning "teaching people things" would've been okay, but we can just say "teaching". |
But I don't know exactly what is my strength. But I don't know exactly what |
For a week, I have been thinking about what my strength is. For a week, I have been thinking about But a little more natural as "I have been thinking about it for a week." |
Today, I found one thing that I can do something continuously. Today, I found one thing: that I can do something continuously. Need some form of punctuation here. Many would work but a colon feels best. |
For example, I have strived my morning routines for 2 years. For example, I have strive "strive" is a difficult word to use. "striven" and "strived" are, in fact, both valid forms for the past participle - but here "strived" sounds really bad to my ear. I don't think there's any rules about it, sometimes one form or another just sounds better. Regardless, you have to strive to *do* something. |
I have three records of days in a row on this site, kindle and Duolinggo app. I have three records of days in a row on this site, kindle and Duoling Unclear exactly what you want to express here. Just "I am keeping a streak going on each of these three platforms"? |
I have written my journal for 9 years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
At this time, I have a homework to combine my strength and my interests.
Here "my strength" is fine because it's referring back to the earlier change I made "my biggest strength". |
I don't know what it will come, but I will do my best about it. I don't know what Had to guess at your meaning here. |
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