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May 11, 2020

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I am working at the airport but after the COVID-19 pandemic, i think i will be fired because my company is in tough situation so they have to fired staff. i was going to looking for a new job but i'm scare because i am not good enough for any job. And then yesterday i saw a job description about the writer so i applied, i had a little worry but i really like read and write so i decided to applied.

Tôi đang làm việc ở sân bay nhưng sau khi dịch COVID-19 tôi nghĩ tôi sẽ bị sa thải vì công ty tôi hiện nay đang rơi vào tình trạng rất khó khăn nên họ phải sa thải bớt nhân viên. Tôi dự định tìm công việc khác nhưng tôi rất sợ vì tôi không đủ tốt cho bất kỳ nghề nào, rồi hôm qua tôi thấy một mẫu tin tuyển dụng về viết lách nên tôi đã ứng tuyển, tôi có một chút lo lắng nhưng vì thích đọc và viết nên tôi quyết định ứng tuyển.

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i was going to looking for a new job but iI'm scared because i am not good enough for any job.

And then yesterday iI saw a job description about thefor a writer so iI applied, i had. I was a little worryied, but iI really like to read and write so iI decided to appliedy.

Alternative (so you don't repeat "apply"):
And then yesterday I saw a job description for a writer. I was a little worried, but I really like to read and write, so I decided to apply.

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Oh man that sounds like a stressful situation to be in. I hope you don't lost the airport job, but I also hope you get the writer job! Remember to capitalize "I" when you used as a subject in sentences. :)

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hiep

May 11, 2020

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Yeah, Thanks a lot. i hope so. i always forget about capitalize "I" :)

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I amwas working at the airport but afterdue to the COVID-19 pandemic, i think i will be fired because my company is in a tough situation, so they have to fired staff.

iI was going to looking for a new job but i'mI was scare because i amd that I was not good enough for any job.

And then yesterday i saw a job description about thefor writer so i applied,. i hadwas a lbittle worryied but i really like to read and write so i decided to appliedy.

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This is nicely done! Don't worry about your job, I pray it will all work out <3

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I am working at the airport, but after the COVID-19 pandemic, iI think iI will be fired because my company is in a tough situation, so they have to fired staff as a result.

You have to capitalize "I"
Also, I added in "as a result" to make it sound better :)

iI was going to looking for a new job, but iI'm scared because iI am not good enough for any job.

And then yesterday iThen, I saw a job descreiption about theyesterday to be a writer, so iI applied, i had. I am a little worryied, but iI really like read and write, so iI decided to appliedy.

You can't say that you "have worry". You say either "I'm worried" or "I'm anxious", or if you want to say "have", you can say "I have anxiety (over the job)"

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Great job!! Only a few small mistakes.

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hiep

May 11, 2020

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thank you very much :D

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I am working at the airport but after the COVID-19 pandemic, i think i will be fired because my company is in tough situation so they have to fired staff.

I am working at the airport, but after the COVID-19 pandemic, iI think iI will be fired because my company is in a tough situation, so they have to fired staff as a result.

You have to capitalize "I" Also, I added in "as a result" to make it sound better :)

I amwas working at the airport but afterdue to the COVID-19 pandemic, i think i will be fired because my company is in a tough situation, so they have to fired staff.

i was going to looking for a new job but i'm scare because i am not good enough for any job.

iI was going to looking for a new job, but iI'm scared because iI am not good enough for any job.

iI was going to looking for a new job but i'mI was scare because i amd that I was not good enough for any job.

i was going to looking for a new job but iI'm scared because i am not good enough for any job.

And then yesterday i saw a job descreption about the writer so i applied, i had a little worry but i really like read and write so i decided to applied.

And then yesterday iThen, I saw a job descreiption about theyesterday to be a writer, so iI applied, i had. I am a little worryied, but iI really like read and write, so iI decided to appliedy.

You can't say that you "have worry". You say either "I'm worried" or "I'm anxious", or if you want to say "have", you can say "I have anxiety (over the job)"

And then yesterday i saw a job description about the writer so i applied, i had a little worry but i really like read and write so i decided to applied.

And then yesterday i saw a job description about thefor writer so i applied,. i hadwas a lbittle worryied but i really like to read and write so i decided to appliedy.

And then yesterday iI saw a job description about thefor a writer so iI applied, i had. I was a little worryied, but iI really like to read and write so iI decided to appliedy.

Alternative (so you don't repeat "apply"): And then yesterday I saw a job description for a writer. I was a little worried, but I really like to read and write, so I decided to apply.

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