March 9, 2023
Films Industry
Filming became a dominant industry some decades ago. Such is the value of films today, that some companies spend millions of dollars producing a single movie. In this essay I will explain my ideas about the need to spend a high quantity of money by making movies. Futhermore, I will show some elements that contribute a movie success.
Pivotally, not only are films an story production but also an art, consequently, it is necessary to invest a high quantity of money. On one hand, such as painting or dancing, filming is able to express creators' feelings. On the other hand, this artistic language lets viewers introduce theirselves in artists minds and intepretate their artwork. For example, from my point of view, Avatar is a way of showing an autochthonous culture where environment has an invaluable meaning. Definitly, movies have an special power to transport people, thus it is a need to put a lot of money into films production.
In adition, there are some factors such as creativity and global perspective view that influence a movie success. Seldom does one feel inlove of a movie which is not able to show innovative ideas which connect with a popular mindset. Taking againg the Avatar case, it is possible to stand that never before has a film taken so many financial risks to exploit both imagination and cleverness of a Director. Surely, creativty and global perspective view are two of most important items when producing a movie.
In conclusion, spending several quatities of money by producing a film is crucial since this is a way of expression, an art. Parallelly, as artwork, creativity and global perspective view cannot missing in a movie.
Films Industry
FThe film ingdustry became a dominant industry some decades ago.
Such is the value of films today,Movies are so important that some companies spend millions of dollars producing a single movie.
In this essay I will explain my ideas about the need to spend a high quantity of money byto makinge movies.
Furthermore, I will show some elements that contribute to a movie's success.
PivotalImportantly, not only are films an story production but also an art, and consequently, it is necessary to invest a high quantity of money.
"Pivotally" is not a word that is often used.
On one hand, such as painting or dancing, filming is able to express creators' feelings, such as painting or dancing.
You usually give examples after you make a claim.
On the other hand, tThis artistic language lets viewers introduce theirmselves into artists minds and interpretate their artwork.
For example, from my point of view, Avatar is a way of showing an autochthoindigenous culture where environment has an invaluable meaning.
I'm gonna be honest, I've never heard of the word "autochthonous" and I'm a native speaker in english! While that means that your vocabulary is incredible, you probably shouldn't use it since it's not used when talking about subjects like colonialism.
Definitely, movies have an special power to transport people, thus it is a need to put a lot of money into films production.
In addition, there are some factors such as creativity and global perspective view that influence a movie's success.
Seldom does one feel inlove of a movie which is not able to show innovative ideas which connect with a popular mindset.
This is an incredible sentence!
Taking againg the Avatar case, it is possible to standbelieve that never before has a film taken so many financial risks to exploit both the imagination and cleverness of a Ddirector.
You could also say "it is possible that...". Most people don't use 'to stand' when describing an argument.
Surely, creativity and global perspective view are two of the most important items when producing a movie.
In conclusion, spending several quantities of money by producing a film is crucial since ithis is a way of expression, an art and is an artform itself.
You could also use "producing a film" instead of "it". Don't say "this" because "producing a film" is a general idea and not something specific enough to require the word "this".
ParallellyFurthermore, as an artwork, creativity and global perspective view cannot be missing in a movie.
"Parallelly" means that something is not the same or contradicts what the other point is trying to say.
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This is incredible work! You are practically a native speaker!
March 9, 2023
Thank so much! Corrections help me understand much better.
Filming became a dominant industry some decades ago.
Such isToday, the value of films today,is such that some companies spend millions of dollars producing a single movie.
In this essay, I will explain my ideas about the need to spend a high quantity of money byto makinge movies.
while/when making movies also could work here, depending on what subtleties you would like to introduce to your sentence.
Furthermore, I will show some elements that contribute to a movie's success.
Pivotally, films are not only are films an story production but also an art, c. Consequently, it is necessary to invest a high quantity of money.
not only X, but also Y
X and Y should be grammatically similar.
Both can be nouns, or verbs, but should look similar.
On one hand, such asfilming, similar to painting or dancing, filming is able to express the creators' feelings.
On the other hand, this artistic language lets viewers introduce theirmselves into artists' minds and interpretate their artwork.
Definitely, movies have an special power to transport people, thus itso there is a need to put a lot of money into films production.
In addition, there are some factors such as creativity and global perspective view that influence a movie's success.
Seldom does one feel in love ofwith a movie whichthat is not able to show innovative ideas which connect with a popular mindset.
Taking againg the Avatar case, it is possible to standay that never before has a film taken so many financial risks to exploitre both the imagination and cleverness of a Director.
exploit->explore I think, I may be misunderstanding what you are trying to say here.
In conclusion, spending severallarge quantities of money by producing a film is crucial since this is a way of expression, an art.
Parallelly, as artwork,Like artwork, a movie can't be missing creativity andor a global perspective view cannot missing in a movie.
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Filming became a dominant industry some decades ago. Filming became a dominant industry
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Such is the value of films today, that some companies spend millions of dollars producing a single movie.
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In this essay I will explain my ideas about the need to spend a high quantity of money by making movies. In this essay, I will explain my ideas about the need to spend a high quantity of money while/when making movies also could work here, depending on what subtleties you would like to introduce to your sentence. In this essay I will explain my ideas about the need to spend a high quantity of money |
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Futhermore, I will show some elements that contribute a movie success. Furthermore, I will show some elements that contribute to a movie's success. Furthermore, I will show some elements that contribute to a movie's success. |
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Pivotally, not only are films an story production but also an art, consequently, it is necessary to invest a high quantity of money. Pivotally, films are not only a not only X, but also Y X and Y should be grammatically similar. Both can be nouns, or verbs, but should look similar.
"Pivotally" is not a word that is often used. |
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On one hand, such as painting or dancing, filming is able to express creators' feelings. On one hand, On one hand, You usually give examples after you make a claim. |
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On the other hand, this artistic language lets viewers introduce theirselves in artists minds and intepretate their artwork. On the other hand, this artistic language lets viewers introduce the
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For example, from my point of view, Avatar is a way of showing an autochthonous culture where environment has an invaluable meaning. For example, from my point of view, Avatar is a way of showing an I'm gonna be honest, I've never heard of the word "autochthonous" and I'm a native speaker in english! While that means that your vocabulary is incredible, you probably shouldn't use it since it's not used when talking about subjects like colonialism. |
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Definitly, movies have an special power to transport people, thus it is a need to put a lot of money into films production. Definitely, movies have a Definitely, movies have a |
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In adition, there are some factors such as creativity and global perspective view that influence a movie success. In addition, there are some factors such as creativity and global perspective view that influence a movie's success. In addition, there are some factors such as creativity and global perspective |
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Seldom does one feel inlove of a movie which is not able to show innovative ideas which connect with a popular mindset. Seldom does one feel in love Seldom does one feel inlove of a movie which is not able to show innovative ideas which connect with a popular mindset. This is an incredible sentence! |
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Taking againg the Avatar case, it is possible to stand that never before has a film taken so many financial risks to exploit both imagination and cleverness of a Director. Taking again exploit->explore I think, I may be misunderstanding what you are trying to say here. Taking again You could also say "it is possible that...". Most people don't use 'to stand' when describing an argument. |
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Surely, creativty and global perspective view are two of most important items when producing a movie. Surely, creativity and global perspective |
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In conclusion, spending several quatities of money by producing a film is crucial since this is a way of expression, an art. In conclusion, spending In conclusion, spending several quantities of money by producing a film is crucial since it You could also use "producing a film" instead of "it". Don't say "this" because "producing a film" is a general idea and not something specific enough to require the word "this". |
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Parallelly, as artwork, creativity and global perspective view cannot missing in a movie.
"Parallelly" means that something is not the same or contradicts what the other point is trying to say. |
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