AThe player doesn't feel any danger in many games, he believed in him to win anyway. The player doesn't feel any danger in many games, he believed in him to win anyway.

Again, not 100% of the meaning, but the above sounds good

AIn many games, the player doesn't feel ain danger in many games,; he believes himself to win anyway, regardless. In many games, the player doesn't feel in danger; he believes himself to win, regardless.

A player doen't feel ain danger in many games, he believe him toe will win anyway. A player doen't feel in danger in many games, he believe he will win anyway.

In my opinion this makegenre of games aren't so interesting as they could be. In my opinion this genre of game aren't so interesting as they could be.

Or 'style' works here

In my opinion this makes games that aren't aso interesting as they could be. In my opinion this makes games that aren't as interesting as they could be.

In my opinion this make games that aren't aso interesting as they could be. In my opinion this make games that aren't as interesting as they could be.

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The dungeon crawler board game The dungeon crawler board game

The dungeon crawler board game The dungeon crawler board game

Today I'll tell you about the hardest board game that I have played - Kingdom Forlorn. Today I'll tell you about the hardest board game that I have played - Kingdom Forlorn.

Today I'll tell you about the hardest board game that I have played - Kingdoms Forlorn. Today I'll tell you about the hardest board game that I have played - Kingdoms Forlorn.

Today I'll tell you about the hardest board game that I have played - Kingdom Forlorn. Today I'll tell you about the hardest board game that I have played - Kingdom Forlorn.

I'll start with a little off-topic introduction. I'll start with a little off-topic introduction.

Not sure if off-topic is what you mean?

I'll start with a little off-toptangential introduction. I'll start with a little tangential introduction.

Also not sure what "off-top" is supposed to be. "off-topic" doesn't really make sense because the following sentences are related to the main topic. "tangential" can mean it has some relevance to the story but is not necessary information

I'll start with a little off-top introduction. I'll start with a little off-top introduction.

"I start with" implies you regularly or repeatedly start this way, but since you're talking about one occurrence in the near future, "I will start with" (or abbreviated to "I'll start with") is the correct tense.

I have some expirience in board games, including Euro-games like Mars colonisation, strategies and even a bit of participation in asome Dungeon and Dragons short sessions. I have some expirience in board games, including Euro-games like Mars colonisation, strategies and even a bit of participation in some Dungeon and Dragons short sessions.

I have some expierience inwith board games, including Euro-games like Mars cColonisation, strategiy games and even a bithave even participation in aed a bit in short sessions of Dungeons and Dragons short sessions. I have some experience with board games, including Euro-games like Mars Colonisation, strategy games and have even participated a bit in short sessions of Dungeons and Dragons.

I have some expierience (in) with board games, including Euro-games like Mars colonisation, strategiy games and even a bit of participation in ashort Dungeon and Dragons short sessions. I have some experience (in) with board games, including Euro-games like Mars colonisation, strategy games and even a bit of participation in short Dungeon and Dragons sessions.

"experience in" is usually used for talking about jobs or skills, while "experience with" is more general/casual and so more appropriate for board games. "in a ... sessions" is wrong, since "sessions" is plural but "a" is only used with singular things. You can use "some", but you can also just leave out an article entirely. Adjective order is weird in English, but generally more specific adjectives (like "Dungeons and Dragons") go closer to the noun than more general adjectives (like "short")

Some guy from the chat of our local board game community asked to play in the Kingdom Forlorn that he hasgot a few weeks ago. Some guy from the chat of our local board game community asked to play in the Kingdom Forlorn that he got a few weeks ago.

Again, not 100% sure, but this sounds good

Some guy from the group chat ofor our local boardgame community asked to play in the Kingdoms Forlorn that he has, which he owns, a few weeks ago. Some guy from the group chat for our local boardgame community asked to play Kingdoms Forlorn, which he owns, a few weeks ago.

"Group chat" feels more fitting for this case. "chat" generally refers to old-style instant messaging boards or like Twitch.tv chat. "Group chat" can refer to group text messages, Discord multi-DMs, etc.

Some guy from the chat of our local boardgame community asked to play in the Kingdom Forlorn that he has a few weeks ago. Some guy from the chat of our local boardgame community asked to play the Kingdom Forlorn that he has a few weeks ago.

"ask" - present tense "asked" - past tense "play in the (X) game" would be like a specific occurrence of it, like he's set up the board already and is getting people to play for one round "play with (X)" is mostly used for kids toys, or for naming the people that joined in A simple "play X" is more used for e.g. video games, or for talking about the idea of playing a board game in general, and not a specific single gameplay session

Not muchMost people like struggle with board games, them don'y're not ready to waste a few hours just to explore the rules and after ithat - spend about four hours to play aing the game. Most people struggle with board games, they're not ready to waste a few hours just to explore the rules and after that - spend about four hours playing the game.

Not muchany people like to struggle in board games,; them doy aren't ready to waste a few hours just to explore the rules and after it -that spend about four hours to play a game. Not many people like to struggle in board games; they aren't ready to waste a few hours just to explore the rules and after that spend about four hours to play a game.

Not muchany people like struggledifficult boardgames, them doy aren't ready to waste a few hours just to explore the rules and after it -that spend about four hours to play a game. Not many people like difficult boardgames, they aren't ready to waste a few hours just to explore the rules and after that spend about four hours to play a game.

But I have helped the guy to find some engaglike-minded personople (*people* idk word fits here). But I have helped the guy to find some like-minded people (*people* idk word fits here).

If you're trying to find a term to mean people who also enjoying playing games 'like-minded' is a good term here

But I havedid helped the guy to find some engaged playerson (*people* idk word fits here). But I did help the guy find some engaged players.

or "people" but I think "players" or "participants" sounds better "have helped" makes it seem like it's a recurring action but it sounds like you only helped him one time

But I have helped the guy to find some engaged person (*people* idk word fits here).ople But I have helped the guy to find some engaged people

"people" = more than one "person" = one person only

When I arrived ato hims, I saw some large boxes and a lot of grey miniatures of creatures, so I asked him how much is it cost? When I arrived at his, I saw some large boxes and a lot of grey miniatures creatures, so I asked him how much it cost?

When I arrived ato hims place I saw some large boxes and a lot of grey miniatures of creatures, so I asked him how much is it cost?. When I arrived at his place I saw some large boxes and a lot of grey miniatures of creatures, so I asked him how much it cost.

We don't say "arrive to [someone]" If you want to directly quote your question, then: 'so I asked him, "How much did it cost?"'

When I arrived to him, I saw some large boxes and a lot of grey miniatures of creatures, so I asked him how much idoes it cost? When I arrived, I saw some large boxes and a lot of grey miniatures of creatures, so I asked him how much does it cost?

It was about 1 ,000 dollars for him. It was about 1,000 dollars for him.

Not a big issue, just we usually, use ',' in our long numbers.

It wasran him about 1 ,000 dollars for him. It ran him about 1,000 dollars.

adding "for him" makes it sound like other people would pay a different price "run" is a colloquial way to say "cost"; it also subtley implies the cost is high. I used it to avoid repeating "cost" again ie. "That'll cost you $50." = "That'll run you $50."

It was about 1 ,000 dollars for him. It was about 1,000 dollars for him.

When writing numbers in English, we use commas as a thousands seperator.

Meanwhile he has a wife and two children (just a joke, it's not my business). Meanwhile he has a wife and two children (just a joke, it's not my business).

😂

The game was released recently, about a year ago. The game was released recently, about a year ago.

The game was released recently, about a year ago. The game was released recently, about a year ago.

The game was released recently, about a year ago. The game was released recently, about a year ago.

"released" is past tense

As he said the studio-developer was founding some money at the Kickstarter and was designing the game for five years. As he said the studio-developer was funding some money at the Kickstarter and was designing the game for five years.

Asccording to what he said, the studio-developer was foundingfundraised money at theon Kickstarter and washad been designing the game for five years. According to what he said, the studio-developer fundraised money on Kickstarter and had been designing the game for five years.

As he said the studio-developer was foundraising money at the Kickstarter and was designing the game for five years. As he said the studio-developer was raising money at the Kickstarter and was designing the game for five years.

"founding" = creating a long standing thing involving many people (usually like companies, cities, countries) "finding" = discovering something, usually implies a little unintentionally "searching for" = trying to find something intentionally But for getting money to make something, like a kickstarter or investors in a business, we usually say "raising money".

I found it exciting - there arewas a lot of stuff and all of it look high quality. I found it exciting - there was a lot of stuff and all of it look high quality.

I found it exciting - there areis a lot of stuff and all of it looks high quality. I found it exciting - there is a lot of stuff and all of it looks high quality.

I found it exciting - there areis a lot of stuff and all of it looks high quality. I found it exciting - there is a lot of stuff and all of it looks high quality.

For example, paper of the rulebook and the character's books are too expensive in production - like magazine. For example, paper of the rulebook and the character's books are too expensive in production - like magazine.

Not 100% sure on the 'like magazine' as to how that fits in

For example, the paper ofthey used for the rulebook and the character's books are toovery expensive in production - like magazine paper. For example, the paper they used for the rulebook and the character's books are very expensive in production - like magazine paper.

For example, the paper of the rulebook and the character's books are toovery expensive in production - like magazine. For example, the paper of the rulebook and the character's books are very expensive in production - like magazine.

"are too expensive in production" kind of implies they can't make the book as it costs too much. If you just want to imply a large level of expense without saying it's a problem, it's better to stick to a simple "very expensive"

And the arts arework is awesome, very stylish. And the artwork is awesome, very stylish.

And the arts are is awesome, very stylish. And the art is awesome, very stylish.

And the arts are awesome, very stylish. And the art are awesome, very stylish.

"art" is its own plural when talking about the things that you have made "arts" is more about when you need a noun to describe multiple skills themselves (like "drawing", "painting", "sewing") rather than the things you make with those skills.

This game is hard - we spend ant eight hours just to complete a half of one encounter. This game is hard - we spent eight hours just to complete a half of one encounter.

This game is hard - we spend ant eight hours to complete a half of one encounter. This game is hard - we spent eight hours to complete half of one encounter.

The only time you use an article with hours is when you use an adjective. ie. "We spent a good eight hours..." "We spent a long eight hours..."

This game is hard - we spend ant eight hours to complete a half of one encounter. This game is hard - we spent eight hours to complete a half of one encounter.

Mostly because we had often to read the rules often. Mostly because we had to read the rules often.

Mostly because we had oftenkept having to read the rules. Mostly because we kept having to read the rules.

You can say "we had to often read" but I think this sounds more natural

Mostly because we had often to read the rules often. Mostly because we had to read the rules often.

And it supposeggests twenty encounters as a minimalum. And it suggests twenty encounters as a minimum.

And it (supposes) assumes twenty encounters as minimal. And it (supposes) assumes twenty encounters as minimal.

This use of "supposes" is ok.. but it sounds a little old fashioned to me.

There is an atmosphere of dark medieval fantasy to it. There is an atmosphere of dark medieval fantasy to it.

And the game challenges you, I think the developer has been inspired by the Dark Souls video game series. And the game challenges you, I think the developer has been inspired by the Dark Souls video game series.

And the game challenges you, I think the developer hwas inspired by the Dark Souls video game series. And the game challenges you, I think the developer was inspired by the Dark Souls video game series.

And the game challenges you, I think the developer hwas inspired by the Dark Souls videogame series. And the game challenges you, I think the developer was inspired by the Dark Souls videogame series.

At the second session we have completed the first encounter by our deaths - quest was failed. At the second session we completed the first encounter by our deaths - quest was failed.

AtIn the second session we have completended the first encounter bywith our deaths - the quest was failed. In the second session we ended the first encounter with our deaths - the quest was failed.

"completed" makes it sound more like it was successful

At the second session we have completfinished the first encounter by our deaths - quest was failed. At the second session we finished the first encounter by our deaths - quest was failed.

"completed" implies success, while "finished" doesn't have any implication as to whether you were successful or not.

Scientific experiments prove that people get the best effect of positive emotions (by dophamine or something the samesimilar) from a reward when they have a fifty percent chance of success. Scientific experiments prove that people get the best effect of positive emotions (by dophamine or something similar) from a reward when they have a fifty percent chance of success.

Scientific experiments have proven that people get the bemost effect of positive emotions (byal effect (from dophamine or something the samesimilar) from a reward when they have a fifty percent chance of success. Scientific experiments have proven that people get the most positive emotional effect (from dopamine or something similar) from a reward when they have a fifty percent chance of success.

Scientific experiments prove that people get the best effect of positive emotions (bylike dophamine or something the samesimilar) from a reward when they have a fifty percent chance of success. Scientific experiments prove that people get the best effect of positive emotions (like dopamine or something similar) from a reward when they have a fifty percent chance of success.

I liked this expierience and I will play in this game more, because it helps you to feel the envireonment (a world around you) instead of you arebeing a superhero machine. I liked this experience and I will play this game more, because it helps you to feel the environment (a world around you) instead of being a superhero machine.

'play in this game' could also work. Again not 100% sure if 'instead of being a superhero machine' get's your intention across.

I liked this expierience and I will play in this game more, because it helps you to feel the envirement (a world around you)immersed in its world instead of like you are a superherouman machine. I liked this experience and I will play this game more, because it helps you to feel immersed in its world instead of like you are a superhuman machine.

I liked this expierience and I will play in this game more, because it helps you to feel the envireonment (a world around you) instead of how you are a superhero machine. I liked this experience and I will play this game more, because it helps you to feel the environment instead of how you are a superhero machine.