May 30, 2026
I'm interested on beauty things, so i wanna explain what's in my make up pouch.
My make up pouch it's compact and the color is pink. Inside my makeup pouch, i have eyebrow pencil with shade brown, i have cushion with shade sand, because my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue. I have some lip product, such as a lipbalm with spf and no spf, i have a lipcream with share brown sugar, i have a powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favorite is my jasmine parfum.
I'm interested oin beauty things, so iI wanna explain what's in my make up pouch.
I'm interested in beauty things, so I wanna explain what's in my make up pouch.
My make up pouch it's compact and the color is pink.
My make up pouch is compact and pink.
Since "pink" is already clearly a colour, if you say something is pink, the "the color is" part is implied and more naturally left out.
Inside my makeup pouch, iI have an brown eyebrow pencil with shade brown, i have cushion with shade sand, and I have sand-colored cushion, because my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
Inside my makeup pouch, I have an brown eyebrow pencil, and I have sand-colored cushion, because my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
"sand" is an example of a word that's not immediately clear as a color, but it's still more natural to use the suffix "-colored" or "colored" as an adjective on its own.
I have some lip product, such as a lip balm with spf and no spf, iI have a lipcream with share brown sugar, ibrown sugar colored lip cream, I have a powder, mascara, eye shadow and also one of my favorite things is my jasmine paerfume.
I have some lip product, such as a lip balm with spf and no spf, I have a brown sugar colored lip cream, I have a powder, mascara, eye shadow and also one of my favorite things is my jasmine perfume.
"lipstick" is one word, but "lib balm" and "lip cream" are two words.
"parfum" is french I believe - it's quite common for cosmetic brands to use french names in their brand names etc. but most people will use the English word when talking about them.
What's in my make -up pouch?
What's in my make-up pouch?
I'm interested oin beauty thingproducts, so iI wannat to explain what's in my make -up pouch.
I'm interested in beauty products, so I want to explain what's in my make-up pouch.
beauty product or make-up products.
Wanna is used in spoken American English.
My make -up pouch it's compact and the colour is pink.
My make-up pouch is compact and the colour is pink.
colour - British spelling.
The colour is pink, which can also be 'and pink in colour'.
Inside my makeup pouch, iI have a brown eyebrow pencil with shade brown, i have cushion with shade sandand a sand-shade cushion, because my skin is quite tan, and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
Inside my makeup pouch, I have a brown eyebrow pencil and a sand-shade cushion, because my skin is quite tan, and the cushion is baby blue.
I have some lip products, such as a lip balm with spfSPF and no spf, iSPF. I have a lip cream with share brown sugar, i. I have a powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favourites is my jasmine paerfume.
I have some lip products, such as lip balm with SPF and no SPF. I have a lip cream with share brown sugar. I have powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favourites is my jasmine perfume.
When writing abbreviations (abv), write the meaning first and then include the abv in a bracket. If you use the same word subsequently, use the abv. OR you write the meaning of the abv at the end of your writing.
I is always I
SPF means sun protective factor, right?
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Ignore my spelling correction for colour and favourites if you're learning American English.
Learn how to use the different punctuation in English. I noticed you only used commas where you could have used a full stop or conjunctions.
Overall, good job 💪🏽👏🏽.
What's in my make up pouch?
What's in my makeup pouch?
"makeup" is one word. Remember to use a question mark for questions!
I'm interested oin beauty things, so iI wannat to explain what's in my make up pouch.
I'm interested in beauty things, so I want to explain what's in my makeup pouch.
Always capitalize the "I" pronoun.
My make up pouch it's compact and the color is pink.
My makeup pouch is compact and the color is pink.
Inside my makeup pouch, iI have a brown eyebrow pencil with s. I hadve brown, i have cushion with shade sanda sand cushion, because my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
Inside my makeup pouch, I have a brown eyebrow pencil. I have a sand cushion, because my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
I have some lip product, such as a lipbalm with spfSPF and no spf, iSPF. I have a lipcream wi(the sharde is "brown sugar, i"). I have a powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favorites is my jasmine parfume.
I have some lip product, such as a lipbalm with SPF and no SPF. I have a lipcream (the shade is "brown sugar"). I have a powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favorites is my jasmine parfume.
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Great job! That sounds like a lovely makeup bag, thank you for sharing it with us! I believe there is no right or wrong way when it comes to language, as long as we can understand each other. But I am glad to help you express yourself in a more native way. You got this! :)
I'm interested oin beauty thingproducts, so iI wannat to explain what's in my make up pouch.
I'm interested in beauty products, so I want to explain what's in my makeup pouch.
My make up pouch it's compact and theits color is pink.
My makeup pouch is compact and its color is pink.
Or you can just say "...compact and pink".
By compact, I assume you mean that it is small and tightly packed with stuff?
Inside my makeup pouch, iI have eyebrow pencil with shade brown, i hava brown-shaded eyebrow pencil and a baby-blue cushion with shadthe sand, becaus shade, since my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
Inside my makeup pouch, I have a brown-shaded eyebrow pencil and a baby-blue cushion with the sand shade, since my skin is quite tan.
"Sand" is the name of a color? If it's the color name of a particular brand, you might even want to capitalize it: "...with the shade Sand".
I also have some lip products, such as a lip balm with spfSPF and no spf, i havewithout SPF and a lip cream with sharin the brown sugar, i have a shade. I have powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favorite is my jasmine parfummy jasmine perfume, which is one of my favorites.
I also have some lip products, such as a lip balm with SPF and without SPF and a lip cream in the brown sugar shade. I have powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also my jasmine perfume, which is one of my favorites.
You may also want to capitalized "brown sugar" here if it is the name of a shade from a specific brand.
Unless "parfum" is a brand name (in which case it should be capitalized), the spelling "perfume" is much more common.
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Nicely done! :-)
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What's in my make up pouch
What's in my make
What's in my make "makeup" is one word. Remember to use a question mark for questions! |
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I'm interested on beauty things, so i wanna explain what's in my make up pouch.
I'm interested
I'm interested beauty product or make-up products. Wanna is used in spoken American English.
I'm interested Always capitalize the "I" pronoun.
I'm interested |
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My make up pouch it's compact and the color is pink.
My make Or you can just say "...compact and pink". By compact, I assume you mean that it is small and tightly packed with stuff?
My make colour - British spelling. The colour is pink, which can also be 'and pink in colour'.
My make
My make up pouch i Since "pink" is already clearly a colour, if you say something is pink, the "the color is" part is implied and more naturally left out. |
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Inside my makeup pouch, i have eyebrow pencil with shade brown, i have cushion with shade sand, because my skin is quite tan and the color of the cushion is baby blue.
Inside my makeup pouch, "Sand" is the name of a color? If it's the color name of a particular brand, you might even want to capitalize it: "...with the shade Sand".
Inside my makeup pouch,
Inside my makeup pouch,
Inside my makeup pouch, "sand" is an example of a word that's not immediately clear as a color, but it's still more natural to use the suffix "-colored" or "colored" as an adjective on its own. |
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I have some lip product, such as a lipbalm with spf and no spf, i have a lipcream with share brown sugar, i have a powder, mascara, eyeshadow and also one of my favorite is my jasmine parfum.
I also have some lip products, such as a lip balm with You may also want to capitalized "brown sugar" here if it is the name of a shade from a specific brand. Unless "parfum" is a brand name (in which case it should be capitalized), the spelling "perfume" is much more common.
I have some lip products, such as When writing abbreviations (abv), write the meaning first and then include the abv in a bracket. If you use the same word subsequently, use the abv. OR you write the meaning of the abv at the end of your writing. I is always I SPF means sun protective factor, right?
I have some lip product, such as a lipbalm with
I have some lip product, such as a lip balm with spf and no spf, "lipstick" is one word, but "lib balm" and "lip cream" are two words. "parfum" is french I believe - it's quite common for cosmetic brands to use french names in their brand names etc. but most people will use the English word when talking about them. |
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