Aug. 8, 2021
Festivals
At the last Spring Festival, when I sat at home, I heard someone cry outside. It was a little boy, and someone sounded like adults were comforting him. One of them asked the little boy whe he was crying while told him that it was Spring Festival, so be happy. What a similar sentence! I can hear it every Spring Festival. Since the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and it is regarded as a new beginning, so there are a lot of taboos during the festival. For example, you must be happy, you must say sweet words, etc. No matter how angry you are, you need to control your emotion in public. Especially when you're confronting older generation.
In the movie "Free Solo", Alex said that he didn't like celebrating festivals because he didn't need to be told when to be happy. I totally agree with him. I want to live really everyday. I don't want to act in the festivals. Moreover, festivals should be a happy vacation to relax instead of busying social life which require so much energy. Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will doubt yourself that if you do something wrong. As a result, you will become scare to show your emotion.
Lucky enough, I am so stubborn since I was a kid, so I get rid of the emotion problem and become a better me. At the same time, I hope more people can realize the situation and get rid of it. Let's live really.
Festivals
At the last Spring Festival, when I sat at home, I heard someone cry outside.
It was a little boy, and someoneit sounded like some adults were comforting him.
One of them asked the little boy whey he was crying while told him thatelling him to be happy because it was Spring Festival, so be happy.
What a similar sentencecommon saying!
I assume you are trying to say that the act/phrase of telling someone to "be happy since it's the Spring festival" is a very typical saying during that time of the year.
Some other options that would work:
1. This is such a typical saying!
2. I hear this quite often.
3. This is such a common saying!
Feel free to correct me if I misunderstood.
I can hear it every Spring Festival.
"I hear it every Spring Festival" sounds better
Since the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and it iss widely regarded as a new beginning, so there are a lot of taboos during the festival.
For example, you must be happy, you must say sweet words, etc.
No matter how angry you are, you need to control your emotion in public.
Especially when you're confrontinginteracting with the older generation.
"confront" sounds a bit too strong/aggressive.
In the movie "Free Solo", Alex said that he didn't like celebrating festivals because he didn't needwant to be told when to be happy.
"want" sounds a bit better than "need" in this case.
I totally agree with him.
I want to live reauthentically everyday.
I don't want to act during the festivals.
You can connect this with previous sentence: I want to live authentically everyday and not have to act during (the) festivals.
Moreover, festivals should be a happy vacation to relax instead of being another part of busying social life which requires so much energy.
You can also say: Moreover, festivals should be a relaxing vacation instead of being another part of busy social life which requires so much energy.
Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will doubt yourself that ifbegin to doubt whether you doid something wrong whenever you act.
This also works:
Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will start wondering whether some of your actions come off the wrong way.
I'm not sure if I understood "you will doubt yourself that if you do something wrong." and what meaning you were trying to aim for. If that's the case, feel free to let me know and I can provide more suggestions.
As a result, you wi'll become scared to show your emotions.
Lucky enough, I am so stubborn since I was a kid, so IFortunately, since I was so stubborn as a child, I was able to get rid of themy emotional problems and become a better meimprove myself.
At the same time, I hope more people can realize the situation and get rid of it.
Let's live reauthentically.
Here are some options that I think would work better:
Let's live authentically.
Let's live truthfully.
Let's live freely.
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Aug. 8, 2021
Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will doubt yourself that ifbegin to doubt whether you doid something wrong whenever you act.
I forget to write the condition.
As a child, if you are always being told to be happy while being camparing other kids, you'll doubt yourself.
Aug. 8, 2021
What a similar sentencecommon saying!
No, you got it. But I want to emphasize I hear it a lot so much that it sounds like a ghost everywhere.
Aug. 10, 2021
I forget to write the condition. As a child, if you are always being told to be happy while being camparing other kids, you'll doubt yourself.
This might work: Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you'll start to doubt yourself.
Although I'm not sure of a good way to say this. Maybe other words to use are "unconfident" or "less confident".
Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you'll feel less confident.
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Festivals This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the last Spring Festival, when I sat at home, I heard someone cry outside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a little boy, and someone sounded like adults were comforting him. It was a little boy, and |
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One of them asked the little boy whe he was crying while told him that it was Spring Festival, so be happy. One of them asked the little boy wh |
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What a similar sentence! What a I assume you are trying to say that the act/phrase of telling someone to "be happy since it's the Spring festival" is a very typical saying during that time of the year. Some other options that would work: 1. This is such a typical saying! 2. I hear this quite often. 3. This is such a common saying! Feel free to correct me if I misunderstood. |
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I can hear it every Spring Festival. I can hear it every Spring Festival. "I hear it every Spring Festival" sounds better |
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Since the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and it is regarded as a new beginning, so there are a lot of taboos during the festival. Since the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and i |
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For example, you must be happy, you must say sweet words, etc. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No matter how angry you are, you need to control your emotion in public. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Especially when you're confronting older generation. Especially when you're "confront" sounds a bit too strong/aggressive. |
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In the movie "Free Solo", Alex said that he didn't like celebrating festivals because he didn't need to be told when to be happy. In the movie "Free Solo", Alex said that he didn't like celebrating festivals because he didn't "want" sounds a bit better than "need" in this case. |
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I totally agree with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to live really everyday. I want to live |
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I don't want to act in the festivals. I don't want to act during the festivals. You can connect this with previous sentence: I want to live authentically everyday and not have to act during (the) festivals. |
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Moreover, festivals should be a happy vacation to relax instead of busying social life which require so much energy. Moreover, festivals should be a happy vacation to relax instead of being another part of busy You can also say: Moreover, festivals should be a relaxing vacation instead of being another part of busy social life which requires so much energy. |
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Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will doubt yourself that if you do something wrong. Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will This also works: Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will start wondering whether some of your actions come off the wrong way. I'm not sure if I understood "you will doubt yourself that if you do something wrong." and what meaning you were trying to aim for. If that's the case, feel free to let me know and I can provide more suggestions. |
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As a result, you will become scare to show your emotion. As a result, you |
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Lucky enough, I am so stubborn since I was a kid, so I get rid of the emotion problem and become a better me.
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At the same time, I hope more people can realize the situation and get rid of it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Let's live really. Let's live Here are some options that I think would work better: Let's live authentically. Let's live truthfully. Let's live freely. |
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