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kiwy

Oct. 27, 2021

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Femisism

Recently, I read some articles about the bad situations of Asian women, no matter they are civilians or princess. When I am reading, I always can't stop thinking my girl students. Most of them have low grades and also lazy, meanwhile, they seem like quite content their lives.
When I was a kid, I always heard people talk about their factory's life. As a result, I thought that working in a factory is so terrible. If I graduated from a college, I could escape the fate of it. Thus, I became study hard after I went to school, and I succeeded finally.
Though there are many ways to avoid being a factory worker, graduating from a college is still a quick way, especially for the poor like me. So I am so grateful for myself for working hard.
Yesterday, there was a phrase "little man" in a passage. I asked the students the meaning of "man" in it. A boy answered that it meant human being (他的回答是“人”). I asked them whether it was so weird that man can not only represent male but also human beings, while woman can't. So the world is ruled by men, we girls should become stronger and get rid of it. How to be strong? Try your best to study. If you prefer to be a housewife, I would also respect you. But tried to think deeply, if you regard working is uneasy, so did men. In that case, why your husband must to share his fortune with you? The law doesn't regard the housework valued either. If you were abandoned by your husband, what could you do?
Though I don't think they would understand my words or even try to understand, I still want to talk about it. At least they will know the existence of the thoughts.

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Femisnism

Recently, I read some articles about the bad situtrials and tribulations of Asian women, no matter whether they are civilians or princesses.

我代替的是一个set phrase

When I am reading, I always can'tcan never stop thinking about my girl students.

Most of them have low grades and are also lazy, meanwhile,but they seem like quite content their lives.

When I was a kid, I always heard people talk about their factory's life.

As a result, I thought that working in a factory is sowould be really terrible.

If I graduated from a college, I could escape theat fate of it.

Thus, I becamegan to study hard after I went toin school, and I succeeded finally the end.

Finally is like 终于 more than 最后 sometimes.

Though there are many ways to avoid becoming a factory worker, graduating from a college is still a quick way, especially for the poor like me.

Ironically, that's a very tough path for a lot of poor Americans to take.

So I am so grateful forto myself for working hard.

Yesterday, there was a phrase, "little man," in a passage.

I asked the students the meaning of "man" in it.

A boy answered that it meant human being (他的回答是“人”).

I asked them whether it was so weird that man can not only represent male but also human beings, while woman can't.

Interestingly, the original use of man did actually mean 人, and words like woman, human, and so on are not related to it.

So, the world is ruled by men,; we girls should become stronger and get rid of ichange that.

How to be strong?

Try your best to study.

If you prefer to be a housewife, I wouldill also respect you.

我们在中文课刚才学习了这个话题,课本的课叫“女性回到厨房是倒退还是进步?”当然同意你就是进步!

But, triedy to think deeply,for a moment: if you regard working ias unpleasy, so did men.ant, don't men too?

In that case, why must your husband must to share his fortune with you?

The law doesn't regard the housework as valuabled either.

If you were abandoned by your husband, what could you do?

Though I don't think they would understand my words, or even try to understand, I still want to talk about it.

At least they will know the existence of the thoughtbe aware of these ideas.

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Nice writing!

kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Oct. 28, 2021

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对了,傻子与白痴乐队今天发新专辑了。

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sivanc

Oct. 28, 2021

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对了,傻子与白痴乐队今天发新专辑了。

我要听一听!

Femisism


Femisnism

Recently, I read some articles about the bad situations of Asian women, no matter they are civilians or princess.


Recently, I read some articles about the bad situtrials and tribulations of Asian women, no matter whether they are civilians or princesses.

我代替的是一个set phrase

When I am reading, I always can't stop thinking my girl students.


When I am reading, I always can'tcan never stop thinking about my girl students.

Most of them have low grades and also lazy, meanwhile, they seem like quite content their lives.


Most of them have low grades and are also lazy, meanwhile,but they seem like quite content their lives.

When I was a kid, I always heard people talk about their factory's life.


When I was a kid, I always heard people talk about their factory's life.

As a result, I thought that working in a factory is so terrible.


As a result, I thought that working in a factory is sowould be really terrible.

If I graduated from a college, I could escape the fate of it.


If I graduated from a college, I could escape theat fate of it.

Thus, I became study hard after I went to school, and I succeeded finally.


Thus, I becamegan to study hard after I went toin school, and I succeeded finally the end.

Finally is like 终于 more than 最后 sometimes.

Though there are many ways to avoid being a factory worker, graduating from a college is still a quick way, especially for the poor like me.


Though there are many ways to avoid becoming a factory worker, graduating from a college is still a quick way, especially for the poor like me.

Ironically, that's a very tough path for a lot of poor Americans to take.

So I am so grateful for myself for working hard.


So I am so grateful forto myself for working hard.

Yesterday, there was a phrase "little man" in a passage.


Yesterday, there was a phrase, "little man," in a passage.

I asked the students the meaning of "man" in it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A boy answered that it meant human being (他的回答是“人”).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I asked them whether it was so weird that man can not only represent male but also human beings, while woman can't.


I asked them whether it was so weird that man can not only represent male but also human beings, while woman can't.

Interestingly, the original use of man did actually mean 人, and words like woman, human, and so on are not related to it.

So the world is ruled by men, we girls should become stronger and get rid of it.


So, the world is ruled by men,; we girls should become stronger and get rid of ichange that.

How to be strong?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Try your best to study.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you prefer to be a housewife, I would also respect you.


If you prefer to be a housewife, I wouldill also respect you.

我们在中文课刚才学习了这个话题,课本的课叫“女性回到厨房是倒退还是进步?”当然同意你就是进步!

But tried to think deeply, if you regard working is uneasy, so did men.


But, triedy to think deeply,for a moment: if you regard working ias unpleasy, so did men.ant, don't men too?

In that case, why your husband must to share his fortune with you?


In that case, why must your husband must to share his fortune with you?

The law doesn't regard the housework valued either.


The law doesn't regard the housework as valuabled either.

If you were abandoned by your husband, what could you do?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Though I don't think they would understand my words or even try to understand, I still want to talk about it.


Though I don't think they would understand my words, or even try to understand, I still want to talk about it.

At least they will know the existence of the thoughts.


At least they will know the existence of the thoughtbe aware of these ideas.

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