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hsen2012

Dec. 2, 2021

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Feeling Hopeless

I haven't been able to achieve anything in my life because I have OCD. I've tried everything on the internet in the last six years, but I couldn't overcome OCD.

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I haven't been able to achieve anything in my life because I have OCD.

Suggest you spell out OCD

I've tried everything on the internet in the last six years, but I couldn'thave not been able to overcome OCD.

I've tried everything on the internet in the last six years, but I couldn't overcome OCDit.

If these sentences are placed together, you can just use "it" to refer to OCD the second time.

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This sounds like a tough situation. However, the writing itself is good, with no need for real correction.

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hsen2012

Dec. 5, 2021

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Thanks 👍

Feeling Hopeless


I haven't been able to achieve anything in my life because I have OCD.


I haven't been able to achieve anything in my life because I have OCD.

Suggest you spell out OCD

I've tried everything on the internet in the last six years, but I couldn't overcome OCD.


I've tried everything on the internet in the last six years, but I couldn't overcome OCDit.

If these sentences are placed together, you can just use "it" to refer to OCD the second time.

I've tried everything on the internet in the last six years, but I couldn'thave not been able to overcome OCD.

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