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kiwy

Sept. 20, 2021

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Feeling good

It is the second day of Mid-autumn Festival vacation. My stomach feels better. So I am quite sure that pressure makes my stomach feel bad.
I read some romance novels and some news today. I went to the supermarket and wanted to buy some fruit, but they were so expensive. As soon as it is festival, the price food and fruit rises. I hate that a lot. And I don't like most of the festivals, because there are so many traditional rules. Relatives will visit each other, which I dislike. I just want to stay alone, social is too tired for me. Tomorrow will be the last day of the vacation, I gonna miss it.

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Feeling good

It is the second day of Mid-autumn Festival vacationbreak.

Usually we say like, winter break, thanksgiving break, christmas break, spring break, summer break, etc., and only use 'vacation' for summer vacation.

My stomach feels better.

So I am quite sure that pressure makes my stomach feel bad.

I read some romance novels and some news today.

I went to the supermarket and wanted to buy some fruit, but they wereit was so expensive.

Here, 'fruit' is actually singular, as you're using it as a 'mass noun.'

As soon as it isthe festival arrives, the price of food and fruit rises.

I hate that a lot.

And I don't like most of the festivals, because there are so many traditional rules.

Relatives will visit each other, which I dislike.

I just want to stay alone, socializing is too tireding for me.

I feel the same way sometimes! In English you can probably call yourself an 'introvert.'

Tomorrow will be the last day of the vacationbreak, I'm gonna miss it.

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Hope you had a good break! Nice writing!

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kiwy

Sept. 21, 2021

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I just want to stay alone, socializing is too tireding for me.

I just don't like stay with the people I don't like. However, I am better than before, I am used to silence now.

Feeling good


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It is the second day of Mid-autumn Festival vacation.


It is the second day of Mid-autumn Festival vacationbreak.

Usually we say like, winter break, thanksgiving break, christmas break, spring break, summer break, etc., and only use 'vacation' for summer vacation.

My stomach feels better.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So I am quite sure that pressure makes my stomach feel bad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I read some romance novels and some news today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I went to the supermarket and wanted to buy some fruit, but they were so expensive.


I went to the supermarket and wanted to buy some fruit, but they wereit was so expensive.

Here, 'fruit' is actually singular, as you're using it as a 'mass noun.'

As soon as it is festival, the price food and fruit rises.


As soon as it isthe festival arrives, the price of food and fruit rises.

I hate that a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I don't like most of the festivals, because there are so many traditional rules.


And I don't like most of the festivals, because there are so many traditional rules.

Relatives will visit each other, which I dislike.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I just want to stay alone, social is too tired for me.


I just want to stay alone, socializing is too tireding for me.

I feel the same way sometimes! In English you can probably call yourself an 'introvert.'

Tomorrow will be the last day of the vacation, I gonna miss it.


Tomorrow will be the last day of the vacationbreak, I'm gonna miss it.

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