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kiwy

Oct. 14, 2021

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Feeling bad

I get a cough today, which have influnced my sleep. I got this nine month ago, at the end of the semester. I really think the reason I get this is my work. After teaching them, my stomach continuously feel uncomfortable. In the morning, before the class, Ms. Liu, the English teacher of Class 1 stood up and stopped. It was empty in her eyes. She always say that she can't continue her lessons because she feels it bored. Her teaching speed falls behind mine for about thress lessons. So I can really tell that her empty eyes mean that how unwilling to work she is.
I am so disappointed at my students now. I stayed late last night to read a novel. When I was reading, I felt like I were in a different world, especially it was raining oustside, it was so quiet that all I heard was the rain drops. I nearly late this morning.
I really hate this job. There are still three months in this semester. I hope I can find something interseting during the three month because I don't want to be depressed.

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Feeling bad

I gethave a cough today, which haves influenced my sleep.

I got ithis nine month ago, too, at the end of the semester.

I really think the reason I get this is mythink it's because of work.

After teaching them, my stomach continuously feelgets uncomfortable.

In the morning, before the class, Ms. Liu, the English teacher ofor Class 1, stood up and stopped me.

It was empty There was nothing behind her eyes.

She always says that she can't continueteach her lessons for the whole class, because she feels it's boreding.

Her teaching speed has fallsen behind mine for about thresse lessons.

So I can really tell that her emptyThe emptiness in her eyes mrean thatlly shows how unwilling to work she is.

I am so disappointed at my students now.

I stayed up late last night to reading a novel.

When I was reading, I felt like I wereas in a different world, especially since it was raining oustside,; it was so quiet that all I heard wasere the rain drops.

"Was" not "were" because your feeling is not hypothetical.

I was nearly late this morning.

I really hate this job.

There are still three months in thise semester.

I hope I can find something intersesting to occupy myself with during these three month because I don't want to bes, so that I don't get depressed.

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Nice! More books are always good. Games, cooking, crafts, painting, sports, whatever tickles your fancy.

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kiwy

Oct. 15, 2021

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In the morning, before the class, Ms. Liu, the English teacher ofor Class 1, stood up and stopped me.

She didn't stopped me. She was going to have a class, so she stood up, but she didn't move and just stand there. It seemed like she was looking somewhere in front, actually, she didn't concerntrate anything.

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kiwy

Oct. 15, 2021

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Thank you. I have been playing Jazz drums morr than a year. I think I need to do more exercise because it benefits both my body and my mind.

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sivanc

Oct. 15, 2021

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Thank you. I have been playing Jazz drums morr than a year. I think I need to do more exercise because it benefits both my body and my mind.

I enjoyed playing drums a lot, when I did. I don't really any more....but I should. Also used to exercise a lot more, but I walk a bunch now so it feels better.

Feeling bad


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I get a cough today, which have influnced my sleep.


I gethave a cough today, which haves influenced my sleep.

I got this nine month ago, at the end of the semester.


I got ithis nine month ago, too, at the end of the semester.

I really think the reason I get this is my work.


I really think the reason I get this is mythink it's because of work.

After teaching them, my stomach continuously feel uncomfortable.


After teaching them, my stomach continuously feelgets uncomfortable.

In the morning, before the class, Ms. Liu, the English teacher of Class 1 stood up and stopped.


In the morning, before the class, Ms. Liu, the English teacher ofor Class 1, stood up and stopped me.

It was empty in her eyes.


It was empty There was nothing behind her eyes.

She always say that she can't continue her lessons because she feels it bored.


She always says that she can't continueteach her lessons for the whole class, because she feels it's boreding.

Her teaching speed falls behind mine for about thress lessons.


Her teaching speed has fallsen behind mine for about thresse lessons.

So I can really tell that her empty eyes mean that how unwilling to work she is.


So I can really tell that her emptyThe emptiness in her eyes mrean thatlly shows how unwilling to work she is.

I am so disappointed at my students now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I stayed late last night to read a novel.


I stayed up late last night to reading a novel.

When I was reading, I felt like I were in a different world, especially it was raining oustside, it was so quiet that all I heard was the rain drops.


When I was reading, I felt like I wereas in a different world, especially since it was raining oustside,; it was so quiet that all I heard wasere the rain drops.

"Was" not "were" because your feeling is not hypothetical.

I nearly late this morning.


I was nearly late this morning.

I really hate this job.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are still three months in this semester.


There are still three months in thise semester.

I hope I can find something interseting during the three month because I don't want to be depressed.


I hope I can find something intersesting to occupy myself with during these three month because I don't want to bes, so that I don't get depressed.

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