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satota

Aug. 7, 2022

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Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners coming to work in our city. They are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.

Today, different from usual, a professional Japanese instructor looked around our lesson and gave us feedback. This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

One of the feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one. The reason is that some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese. She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help teach Japanese.

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Feedback from a Japanese instructor

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreignerspeople from abroad who cominge to work in our city.

They arework hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries locatedback home in Southeast Asia.

Today, was different from usual, a. A professional Japanese instructor looked arounobserved our lessons and gave us feedback.

This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreignernon natives.

One of thepiece of feedback that I can remember is to use polite Japanese, and not a casual one.

The reason for this is that some Japanese couldmight feel offended when they hear foreignernon natives use informal Japanese.

賛成しました。

She also added that we, Japanese instructors, should explain things using the です/ます form.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some, she showed us books which will help us teach Japanese.

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上手にかけています!

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners comingthat come to work in our city.

They are hardworking, because they mustneed to send money to their parents in their countries located in Southe East Asia.

Today, different from usuunlike normal, a professional Japanese instructor looked aroundt our lesson and gave us feedback.

More natural sounding

This opportunity was precious, since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

One of the feedbacksuggestions I can remember being given is to use polite Japanese, and not a casual onlanguage.

The reason is thatis is because some Japanese people could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.

She also added that we, the Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

At the end of the feedback session, she introduced us to some books which will help us teach Japanese.

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Great work!

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satota

Aug. 8, 2022

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Thank you!

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Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to theto foreigners coming to work in our city.

They a're hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their home countries located in Southeast Asia.

Today, different fromunlike usual, a professional Japanese instructor looked arounobserved our lesson and gave us feedback.

This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

One of the pieces of feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one.

The reason is thatis is because some Japanese couldpeople might feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.

She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help us teach Japanese.

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Well written and best of luck teaching! I hope to learn a lot from you as well.

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satota

Aug. 8, 2022

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Thank you!

Feedback from Japanese instructor

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners comingwho come to work in our city.

TI believe they are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.

Today, different from usual something unusual happened, a professional Japanese instructor looked around our lesson and gave us feedback.

This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

One of thSome feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a instead of casual one.

The reason is thatis is because some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.

She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

At the end of ther feedback, she introduced us to some books which willould help us better teach Japanese.

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Lovely !

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frannie_

Aug. 7, 2022

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Everything you said made sense, however it didn’t sound too natural, so I’ve changed some things to make it sound more natural :)

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satota

Aug. 7, 2022

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Thank you!

Feedback from Japanese instructor


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Feedback from a Japanese instructor

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners coming to work in our city.


Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners comingwho come to work in our city.

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to theto foreigners coming to work in our city.

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners comingthat come to work in our city.

Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreignerspeople from abroad who cominge to work in our city.

They are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.


TI believe they are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.

They a're hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their home countries located in Southeast Asia.

They are hardworking, because they mustneed to send money to their parents in their countries located in Southe East Asia.

They arework hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries locatedback home in Southeast Asia.

Today, different from usual, a professional Japanese instructor looked around our lesson and gave us feedback.


Today, different from usual something unusual happened, a professional Japanese instructor looked around our lesson and gave us feedback.

Today, different fromunlike usual, a professional Japanese instructor looked arounobserved our lesson and gave us feedback.

Today, different from usuunlike normal, a professional Japanese instructor looked aroundt our lesson and gave us feedback.

More natural sounding

Today, was different from usual, a. A professional Japanese instructor looked arounobserved our lessons and gave us feedback.

This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.


This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This opportunity was precious, since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.

This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreignernon natives.

One of the feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one.


One of thSome feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a instead of casual one.

One of the pieces of feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one.

One of the feedbacksuggestions I can remember being given is to use polite Japanese, and not a casual onlanguage.

One of thepiece of feedback that I can remember is to use polite Japanese, and not a casual one.

The reason is that some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.


The reason is thatis is because some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.

The reason is thatis is because some Japanese couldpeople might feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.

The reason is thatis is because some Japanese people could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese.

The reason for this is that some Japanese couldmight feel offended when they hear foreignernon natives use informal Japanese.

賛成しました。

She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She also added that we, the Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.

She also added that we, Japanese instructors, should explain things using the です/ます form.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help teach Japanese.


At the end of ther feedback, she introduced us to some books which willould help us better teach Japanese.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help us teach Japanese.

At the end of the feedback session, she introduced us to some books which will help us teach Japanese.

At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some, she showed us books which will help us teach Japanese.

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