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nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 4, 2023

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February 4th, 2023

Today, I went skiing by myself. What a surprise! It's been four years since I've been skiing due to my sons' exams and the corona situation. The ski resort we went to was Biwako Valley. It is the closest ski resort from my house. It took me a little over an hour to get there. I went to the top of the mountain by ropeway. Up to 121 people are able to ride on this ropeway at any one time. The snow conditions were excellent so I really enjoyed it.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html

今日は一人でスキーに行きました。子供の受験とかコロナがあったので、何と4年ぶりのスキーです。行ったスキー場はびわ湖バレイです。うちから一番近いスキー場です。そこまで1時間ちょっとかかりました。山頂まではロープウェイで上がります。ロープウェイは121人乗ることができます。雪質もよくてとても楽しめました。
こちらが写真です。
http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html
T


今日は一人でスキーに行きました。子供の受験とかコロナがあったので、何と4年ぶりのスキーです。行ったスキー場はびわ湖バレイです。うちから一番近いスキー場です。そこまで1時間ちょっとかかりました。山頂まではロープウェイで上がります。ロープウェイは121人乗ることができます。雪質もよくてとても楽しめました。
こちらが写真です。
http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html

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February 4th, 2023

Today, I went skiing by myself.

What a surprise!

It's been four years since I've been skiing due to my sons' exams and the corona situation.

The ski resort weI(?) went to was Biwako Valley.

It is the closest ski resort fromto my house.

It took me a little over an hour to get there.

I went to the top of the mountain by ropeway.

Up to 121 people are able to ride on this ropeway at any one time.

The snow conditions were excellent so I really enjoyed it.

Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html

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凄い!楽しそう!上手に書けています!

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nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 4, 2023

4

Thank you!

February 4th, 2023

Today, I went skiing by myself.

What a surprise!

It's been four years since I've been skiing due to my sons' exams and the corona situation.

Just checking:
[ sons' ] is right if you have two or one sons and they both had exams.
[ son's ] is right if you only have one son and he had exams.

The ski resort weI went to was Biwako Valley.

It is the closest ski resort fromto my house.

It took me a little over an hour to get there.

I went to the top of the mountain by ropeway.

Up to 121 people are able to ride on this ropeway at any one time.

The snow conditions were excellent so I really enjoyed it.

Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html

今日は一人でスキーに行きました。子供の受験とかコロナがあったので、何と4年ぶりのスキーです。行ったスキー場はびわ湖バレイです。うちから一番近いスキー場です。そこまで1時間ちょっとかかりました。山頂まではロープウェイで上がります。ロープウェイは121人乗ることができます。雪質もよくてとても楽しめました。

こちらが写真です。

http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html

T

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Lucky - so much snow! Great to read about your good time!

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nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 4, 2023

4

Thank you!

February 4th, 2023

Today, I went skiing by myself.

What a surprise!

It's been four years since I've been skiing due to my sons' exams and the corona situation.

The ski resort we went to was Biwako Valley.

It is the closest ski resort from my house.

It took me a little over an hour to get there.

I went to the top of the mountain by ropeway.

Up to 121 people are able to ride on this ropeway at any one time.

The snow conditions were excellent so I really enjoyed it.

Or you could say "I really enjoyed the excellent snow conditions."

nambatsuyoshi's avatar
nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 4, 2023

4

Thank you!

February 4th, 2023

Today, I went skiing by myself.

What a surprise!

It's been four years since I've been skiing due to my sons' exams and the corona situation.

The ski resort weI went to was Biwako Valley.

Since you went skiing by yourself, use "I" instead of "we".

It took me a little over an hour to get there.

I went to the top of the mountain by ropeway.

Up to 121 people are able to ride on this ropeway at any one time.

The snow conditions were excellent so I really enjoyed it.

Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/ski/2023/20230204/w800/index-e.html

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Nice photos. The view looks great

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nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 4, 2023

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今日は一人でスキーに行きました。子供の受験とかコロナがあったので、何と4年ぶりのスキーです。行ったスキー場はびわ湖バレイです。うちから一番近いスキー場です。そこまで1時間ちょっとかかりました。山頂まではロープウェイで上がります。ロープウェイは121人乗ることができます。雪質もよくてとても楽しめました。


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