June 12, 2023
Fear of the future
I feel that all my life until now has been delayed compared with my acquaintance's life. In my earlies 20's when they were dancing at parties I was playing videogames like a Kid, this partly because I had a very religious and overprotective parents. Now when I'm about to start my 30's, I long for being at parties dancing but people from my generation is starting to make up their own family. that wouldn't be a problem if I weren't about to be a "real adult", too old to be in parties. I feel that I spend my youth shut away in my room in front of a screen. In this moment I want to go outside and meet people but everybody has their own group of friends. I just hope there will be more people in my situation in order to live our youth but in our 30's.
In my earliesy 20's when they were dancing at parties I was playing videogames like a Kkid, th. This is partly because I had a very religious and overprotective parents.
Now when I'm about to start my 30's, I long for being at parties dancing but people from my generation isare starting to make up their own family.
I feel that I spendt my youth shut away in my room in front of a screen.
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Stay positive, many people are in the same situation as you. I was addicted to video games until 23 years old. Now two years later I go out and socialize every day. Change takes time.
June 14, 2023
Thanks for your words and corrections :D
Fear of the future
I feel that all my life until now has been delayed compared with my acquaintance's life.
In my earliesy 20's whilen they were dancing at parties I was playing video games like a Kid, this partially because I had a very religious and overprotective parents.
Now whenAs I'm about to start my 30's, I long for being at parties dancing but people from my generation is startare beginning to make up their own familyies.
that wouldn't be a problem if I weren't about to be a "real adult", too old to be in parties.
I feel that I spendt my youth shut away in my room in front of a screen.
I just hope there will be more people in my situation in order to live our youth but in our 30's.
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30s is still young
June 14, 2023
Thanks! :D
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I feel that all my life until now has been delayed compared with my acquaintance's life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In my earlies 20's when they were dancing at parties I was playing videogames like a Kid, this partly because I had a very religious and overprotective parents. In my earl In my earl |
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Now when I'm about to start my 30's, I long for being at parties dancing but people from my generation is starting to make up their own family.
Now when I'm about to start my 30's, I long for being at parties dancing but people from my generation |
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that wouldn't be a problem if I weren't about to be a "real adult", too old to be in parties. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel that I spend my youth shut away in my room in front of a screen. I feel that I spen I feel that I spen |
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In this moment I want to go outside and meet people but everybody has their own group of friends. |
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I just hope there will be more people in my situation in order to live our youth but in our 30's. I just hope there will be more people in my situation in order to live our youth but in our 30 |
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