Nov. 8, 2021
Why I pick Japan to start my business
First of all, I like the place.
I can start my business in China which will be much easier.
This is a “clean” business.
I opened a restaurant before, the business did make profit but hygiene issues is never easy.
I see a market opportunity.
My main target customers will be people who is age 50 or above.
Japan is one of the country has a lot of old folks.
This is not a big business.
My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two year.
I just want to make a business can sustain year by year.
I wish by provide this platform will able to find a talent and let the world know.
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Why I picked/am picking Japan to start my business Why I picked/am picking Japan to start my business
First of all, I like the placecountry.
First of all, I like the country.
I canould start my business in China which willould be much easier.
I could start my business in China which would be much easier.
This is a “clean” business.
I opened a restaurant before, the business did make profit butwas profitable but the hygiene issues iswere never easy to deal with.
I opened a restaurant before, the business was profitable but the hygiene issues were never easy to deal with.
I see a market opportunity.
My main target customers will be people who is aged 50 or above.
My main target customers will be people aged 50 or above.
Japan is one of the country that has a lot of old folks.
Japan is one country that has a lot of old folks.
This is not a big business.
My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two years. My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two years.
I just want to makestart a business that can be sustainable year byafter year.
I just want to start a business that can be sustainable year after year.
I wish by providehope that by using this platform I will able to find a talent and let the world know.
I hope that by using this platform I will able to find talent and let the world know.
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Why I pick Japan to start my business Why I picked/am picking Japan to start my business Why I picked/am picking Japan to start my business |
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I can start my business in China which will be much easier.
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This is a “clean” business. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I opened a restaurant before, the business did make profit but hygiene issues is never easy.
I opened a restaurant before, the business |
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I see a market opportunity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My main target customers will be people who is age 50 or above.
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Japan is one of the country has a lot of old folks.
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This is not a big business. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two year. My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two years. My aim is not to make 10 shops within one or two years. |
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I just want to make a business can sustain year by year.
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I wish by provide this platform will able to find a talent and let the world know.
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