Do you like taking part in discussions?
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It depends of circumstances. If one of the other people is someone who just wants to say his or her opinions without conversation, then I don’t like joining in. A debate should be a constructive talking instead of just speaking ill of others.
It depends ofon the circumstances.
If one of the other people is someone who just wants to say his or hershare their opinions without having a real conversation, then I don’t like joining in.
A debate should be a constructive talking instead of just speaking ill ofcriticizing others.
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I think discussions can also help you learn new ideas, even if you don’t always agree with others. Asking questions and exploring different points of view makes the conversation more meaningful. You can also try to guide the discussion toward constructive ideas by encouraging others to explain their thoughts or focusing on solutions. Practicing this will help you become more confident and make discussions more productive.
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I felt like I wrote it well this time, but I still make a lot of mistakes. I hope that at least you were able to understand what I was trying to say.
It depends ofon the circumstances.
If one of the other peopleparticipants is someone who just wants to say his or hertheir opinions without conversation, then I don’t like joining in.
Instead of "his or her", you should probably just use "their". Same with "him or her" -> "them" and "he or she" -> "they".
A debate should be a constructive, talking instead of just speaking ill of others.
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Good work! If a debate is just people speaking past each other, then is it even a debate? At that point it's not much more than a simple fight.
It sounds like you are describing someone who wants to rant or harangue. This person isn't interested in discussing, conversing, or debating.
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I felt like I wrote it well this time, but I still make a lot of mistakes. I hope that at least you were able to understand what I was trying to say.
Yes, what you want to say is quite clear. As you are aware, people make suggestions and state preferences when they correct a text. You can sort the corrections you receive into two groups, and then count the mistakes. In this text, there is only ONE grammatical error: "depends of "is incorrect English. The correction is "depends on."
It depends ofon the circumstances.
"To depend on" is the correct verb.
If one of the other people is someone whopartaking in the conversation just wantswant to say his or hershare their opinions without conversationand not converse, then I don’twouldn't like joining into join them.
More natural
A debate should be a constructive talking instead of just speaking ill of others.
no need for extra words
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Great job!
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I felt like I wrote it well this time, but I still make a lot of mistakes. I hope that at least you were able to understand what I was trying to say.
Yes, even though there were some grammatical mistakes, I was easily able to understand the meaning of your text.
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