June 19, 2026
In 2021, my group decided to do a vacation of 3 days to San Vito.
San Vito is a small touristic town placed between Trapani and Palermo, which are two city of Sicily, in Italy.
In summer there are a lot of people who arrive from all the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beach.
We rented an enormous house with 10 room for sleeping.
Near the beach there is two field, one for playing basketball and one to organize football match with other people.
A few feet from here, there is a famous discoteque, where people used to drink, dancing.
There is also a lot of ice cream shop with various flavors like strawberry, watermelon, pistachio etc.
We are used to ride a bike to move to the city centre.
I remeber with love this moments because nowdays we have not 18yo. Some friends started the university and we have few time to organize a new vacation.
Every year I have tried to plan a new summer trip, although my friends have some exam to make for september session.
I graduated last March and I’m going to Padua for studying Electronic Engineering.
Vacation in San Vito
In 2021, my group decided to do a vacation of 3 daysthree day vacation to San Vito.
In 2021, my group decided to do a three day vacation to San Vito.
In this sentence because you are using ‘three days’ to describe the vacation it becomes an adjective. There are a few important points to remember…
1) In English we almost always put the adjective in front of the noun. So, ‘three-day’ must move to the front of ‘vacation’
2) Adjectives are never plural in English. They are always singular, so ‘three-days’ becomes ‘three day’.
3) There is a third rule, but it isn’t relevant here.
San Vito is a small touristic town placlocated between Trapani and Palermo, which are two city ofies in Sicily, in (Italy).
San Vito is a small tourist town located between Trapani and Palermo, two cities in Sicily (Italy).
1) We do not use the word ‘touristic’, instead we use either ‘tourist town’ or ‘touristy town’.
Be careful with ‘touristy’ as we often use it negatively, it is used to talk about a town that is overcrowded or full of cheap souvenir shops.
2) We are more likely to use ‘located’ here
In summer there are a lot of people who arrive from all the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beaches (where?). In summer there are a lot of people who arrive from all the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beaches (where?).
1) We use plural ‘beaches’ here because if we are talking about the beach being ‘one of the’ it indicates that there is a group you are choosing from.
2) Here I would specify where the most beautiful beach is. For example… “..one of the most wonderful beaches in Italy”.
We rented an enormous house with 10 rooms for sleeping. We rented an enormous house with 10 rooms for sleeping.
We have ten rooms, so we must use the plural.
You could also say “…an enormous house that slept 10”. This is an idiomatic phrase that uses the verb ‘To sleep [number]’. You will see/hear this phrase when talking about rentals, hotels and real estate. For example…
-This room sleeps six people.
-Our university house had four bedrooms, but slept eight.
Near the beach there isare two fields, one for playing basketball and one to organize football match with other peoplefor playing football.
Near the beach there are two fields, one for playing basketball and one for playing football.
1) One field = there is a field
Two + fields= there are [number] fields
Remember to add the -s onto the end of the noun to make it plural.
2) We English are quite lazy, so we would probably say ‘for playing football’ here.
A few feet from there field, there is a famous discotequeclub/nightclub, where people used to drink, dancing.
A few feet from the field, there is a famous club/nightclub, where people used to drink, dancing.
1) Discoteque feels incredibly dated now. We are more likely to say ‘a club’ / ‘a nightclub’. If you use ‘discoteque’ it makes us think of the 1970’s (think, disco balls🕺).
There isare also a lot of ice cream shops with various flavours like strawberry, watermelon, pistachio etc.
There are also a lot of ice cream shops with various flavours like strawberry, watermelon, pistachio etc.
1) We are talking about many ice cream shops so we have to use plurals here.
2) Excellent use of etc. here 👏
We are used to ride aour bikes to moveget to the city centre.
We used to ride our bikes to get to the city centre.
1) We used to = Something that we used to do (imperfetto).
We are used to [gerund] = Something that you are familiar with because you do it all the time.
For example: “I am used to the sound of crying, because my neighbours have a new baby”. This means that you are familiar with the sound of a baby crying because you neighbours have a young child.
2) Because you used ‘we’ at the start of your sentence it is implied that there were multiple people (and multiple bikes) so we need to use the plural here.
I remember with love this momentsthese moments with love because nowadays we havare not 18yo anymore.
I remember these moments with love because nowadays we are not 18 anymore.
1) We need to use the plural ‘these’ here because we are talking about ‘moments’ (plural).
2) In English we have to use ‘To be’ when we are talking about how old we are. For example: ‘I am 20’ or ‘he is 60’ this is different to Romance languages where you use ‘To have’.
3) The structure “we have not [noun]” is quite old fashioned. Your options are…
-We are no longer [age]
- We aren’t [age] anymore.
Some friends started the university and we have fewlittle time to organizse aour newxt vacation.
Some friends started university and we have little time to organise our next vacation.
1) In English we do not use ‘started the’ when talking about attending a place of education.
2) ‘Time’ is not countable in English, so we cannot say ‘few time’ instead we must say ‘little time’. It’s a little bit like when we say “il tuo capello è bellissimo” instead of “i tuoi capelli sono bellissimi”.
Every year I have triedI try to plan a new summer trip, although my friends have som every year, but my friends always have exams to mtake for sin September session.
I try to plan a new summer trip every year, but my friends always have exams to take in September.
1) ‘I try’ works well here because you are talking about a regular, ongoing habit.
2) If we want to talk about exams (plural) we will often use ‘exams’ on its own.
3) In English, we do not use ‘to make’ with an exam. Students either ‘take an exam’ or ‘sit an exam’.
4) Saying ‘in September’ is more natural here.
I graduated last March and I’m going to go to Padua forto studying Electronic Engineering.
I graduated last March and I’m going to go to Padua to study Electronic Engineering.
When you use ‘I’m going’ it sounds like you are going immediately.
Feedback
Firstly, I’d like to say that you have a great vocabulary and are doing an excellent job of getting your ideas across clearly.
I did notice a few issues related to common ‘traps’ between our two languages (the same issues you will see in my texts) such as describing uncountable vs countable nouns, verb tenses and plurals.
Keep up the great work-paying attention to these small issues will help you improve your English massively👍
Vacation in San Vito
In 2021, my group decided to do a vacation of 3 daysthree-day vacation to San Vito.
In 2021, my group decided to do a three-day vacation to San Vito.
For three days I would be more likely to say "decided to take a short break in San Vito".
San Vito is a small touristic town placed between Trapani and Palermo, which are two city ofies in Sicily, in Italy.
San Vito is a small tourist town between Trapani and Palermo, which are two cities in Sicily, in Italy.
In summer there are a lot of people who arrivpeople come from all over the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beaches in Italy.
In summer people come from all over the world to see one of the most wonderful beaches in Italy.
Most of these corrections are to make it sound more natural. Apart from missing the plural on beaches the rest of it was grammatically correct, just not a very native-like way of saying it.
We rented an enormous house with 10 room for sleepingten bedrooms.
We rented an enormous house with ten bedrooms.
Near the beach there is two fieldThere are two fields near the beach, one for playing basketball and one to organizefor informal football match with other peoples.
There are two fields near the beach, one for playing basketball and one for informal football matches.
The grammatically correct way to end your sentence is "one for organising football matches with other people" but that is an unusual phrasing in English so I tried to come up with something that might be what you meant.
A few feet from there, there is a famous discoteque,club where people used to drink, and go dancing.
A few feet from there, there is a famous club where people used to drink and go dancing.
In English "a disco" is more associated with events for kids at schools. Adults tend to "go clubbing" or "go to a club".
There isare also a lot of ice cream shops with various flavors like strawberry, watermelon, and pistachio etc.
There are also a lot of ice cream shops with flavors like strawberry, watermelon and pistachio etc.
We are used to ride a bike to movcycle to the city centre.
We used to cycle to the city centre.
I remeber with love this moments because nowdays we have not 18yo.have fond memories of that trip now that I am older.
I have fond memories of that trip now that I am older.
In English you say "we are not eighteen", not "we have not eighteen". However this whole sentence wasn't a very native way to express the idea so I have suggested an alternative.
Some of my friends started theare at university now and we have few timedon't have many opportunities to organize a newnother vacation.
Some of my friends are at university now and we don't have many opportunities to organize another vacation.
Every year since then I have tried to plan a newnother summer trip, althoughbut my friends have some exams to make for sdo before the September session.term.
Every year since then I have tried to plan another summer trip, but my friends have exams to do before the September term.
I graduated last March and I’m going to Padua forto studying Electronic Engineering.
I graduated last March and I’m going to Padua to study Electronic Engineering.
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In 2021, my group decided to do a vacation of 3 days to San Vito.
In 2021, my group decided to do a For three days I would be more likely to say "decided to take a short break in San Vito".
In 2021, my group decided to do a In this sentence because you are using ‘three days’ to describe the vacation it becomes an adjective. There are a few important points to remember… 1) In English we almost always put the adjective in front of the noun. So, ‘three-day’ must move to the front of ‘vacation’ 2) Adjectives are never plural in English. They are always singular, so ‘three-days’ becomes ‘three day’. 3) There is a third rule, but it isn’t relevant here. |
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San Vito is a small touristic town placed between Trapani and Palermo, which are two city of Sicily, in Italy.
San Vito is a small tourist
San Vito is a small tourist 1) We do not use the word ‘touristic’, instead we use either ‘tourist town’ or ‘touristy town’. Be careful with ‘touristy’ as we often use it negatively, it is used to talk about a town that is overcrowded or full of cheap souvenir shops. 2) We are more likely to use ‘located’ here |
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In summer there are a lot of people who arrive from all the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beach.
In summer Most of these corrections are to make it sound more natural. Apart from missing the plural on beaches the rest of it was grammatically correct, just not a very native-like way of saying it. In summer there are a lot of people who arrive from all the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beaches (where?). In summer there are a lot of people who arrive from all the world in order to see one of the most wonderful beaches (where?). 1) We use plural ‘beaches’ here because if we are talking about the beach being ‘one of the’ it indicates that there is a group you are choosing from. 2) Here I would specify where the most beautiful beach is. For example… “..one of the most wonderful beaches in Italy”. |
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We rented an enormous house with 10 room for sleeping.
We rented an enormous house with We rented an enormous house with 10 rooms for sleeping. We rented an enormous house with 10 rooms for sleeping. We have ten rooms, so we must use the plural. You could also say “…an enormous house that slept 10”. This is an idiomatic phrase that uses the verb ‘To sleep [number]’. You will see/hear this phrase when talking about rentals, hotels and real estate. For example… -This room sleeps six people. -Our university house had four bedrooms, but slept eight. |
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Near the beach there is two field, one for playing basketball and one to organize football match with other people.
The grammatically correct way to end your sentence is "one for organising football matches with other people" but that is an unusual phrasing in English so I tried to come up with something that might be what you meant.
Near the beach there 1) One field = there is a field Two + fields= there are [number] fields Remember to add the -s onto the end of the noun to make it plural. 2) We English are quite lazy, so we would probably say ‘for playing football’ here. |
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A few feet from here, there is a famous discoteque, where people used to drink, dancing.
A few feet from there, there is a famous In English "a disco" is more associated with events for kids at schools. Adults tend to "go clubbing" or "go to a club".
A few feet from the 1) Discoteque feels incredibly dated now. We are more likely to say ‘a club’ / ‘a nightclub’. If you use ‘discoteque’ it makes us think of the 1970’s (think, disco balls🕺). |
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There is also a lot of ice cream shop with various flavors like strawberry, watermelon, pistachio etc.
There
There 1) We are talking about many ice cream shops so we have to use plurals here. 2) Excellent use of etc. here 👏 |
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We are used to ride a bike to move to the city centre.
We
We 1) We used to = Something that we used to do (imperfetto). We are used to [gerund] = Something that you are familiar with because you do it all the time. For example: “I am used to the sound of crying, because my neighbours have a new baby”. This means that you are familiar with the sound of a baby crying because you neighbours have a young child. 2) Because you used ‘we’ at the start of your sentence it is implied that there were multiple people (and multiple bikes) so we need to use the plural here. |
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I remeber with love this moments because nowdays we have not 18yo.
I In English you say "we are not eighteen", not "we have not eighteen". However this whole sentence wasn't a very native way to express the idea so I have suggested an alternative.
I remember 1) We need to use the plural ‘these’ here because we are talking about ‘moments’ (plural). 2) In English we have to use ‘To be’ when we are talking about how old we are. For example: ‘I am 20’ or ‘he is 60’ this is different to Romance languages where you use ‘To have’. 3) The structure “we have not [noun]” is quite old fashioned. Your options are… -We are no longer [age] - We aren’t [age] anymore. |
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Some friends started the university and we have few time to organize a new vacation.
Some of my friends
Some friends started 1) In English we do not use ‘started the’ when talking about attending a place of education. 2) ‘Time’ is not countable in English, so we cannot say ‘few time’ instead we must say ‘little time’. It’s a little bit like when we say “il tuo capello è bellissimo” instead of “i tuoi capelli sono bellissimi”. |
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Every year I have tried to plan a new summer trip, although my friends have some exam to make for september session.
Every year since then I have tried to plan a
1) ‘I try’ works well here because you are talking about a regular, ongoing habit. 2) If we want to talk about exams (plural) we will often use ‘exams’ on its own. 3) In English, we do not use ‘to make’ with an exam. Students either ‘take an exam’ or ‘sit an exam’. 4) Saying ‘in September’ is more natural here. |
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I graduated last March and I’m going to Padua for studying Electronic Engineering.
I graduated last March and I’m going to Padua
I graduated last March and I’m going to go to Padua When you use ‘I’m going’ it sounds like you are going immediately. |
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