Write about: - family problems - - financial difficulties - - ______ (your own idea) My essay: Education is crucial in our society and the current young generations are is the most well prepared ofin history. Write about: - family problems - - financial difficulties - - ______ (your own idea) My essay: Education is crucial in our society and the current generation is the most well prepared in history.

Write about: - family problems - - financial difficulties - - ______ (your own idea) My essay: Education is crucial in our society and the current young generations are the most well prepared of(generations) in history. Write about: - family problems - - financial difficulties - - ______ (your own idea) My essay: Education is crucial in our society and the current young generations are the most well prepared (generations) in history.

However, a recent trend has been detected regarding a large amountnumber of teenagers leaving early the school, early even in the most advanced and wealthy countrsocieties. However, a recent trend has been detected regarding a large number of teenagers leaving school early even in the most advanced and wealthy societies.

"amount" I would say is more uncountable. "societies" would be used in a situation like this.

However, a recent trend has been detected regarding a large amount of teenagers leaving early the school early, even in the most advanced and wealthy countries. However, a recent trend has been detected regarding a large amount of teenagers leaving school early, even in the most advanced and wealthy countries.

In this report this new trend is going to be described, searching for its causes and suggesting solutionsits causes investigated and some solutions suggested. In this report this new trend is going to be described, its causes investigated and some solutions suggested.

passive voice all the way through

In this report this new trend is going to be describeThis essay will describe this new trend, searching for its causes, and suggesting solutions. This essay will describe this new trend, search its causes, and suggest solutions.

Reports and essays are different things. Since you described this as essay earlier, I changed "report" to "essay" Also it sounds better if you stick to using either active or passive voice in a sentence instead of switching from passive voice to active midway.

AThe first reason for this problem can be found in internal family problemissues. The first reason for this problem can be found in internal family issues.

specfic reason so "the". "issues" uses different word so a bit of variety

AThe first reason for this problem can be found in internal family problems/conflicts/issues. The first reason for this problem can be found in internal family problems/conflicts/issues.

Diysfunctional families, with parents dealing with alcohol or drugs dependencey, are not the best environment for a kid forto growing up in. Dysfunctional families, with parents dealing with alcohol or drugs dependency, are not the best environment for a kid to grow up in.

Diysfunctional families, with parents dealing with alcohol or drugs dependencey, are not the best environment for a kid for growing up / for a kid to grow up in. Dysfunctional families, with parents dealing with alcohol or drug dependency, are not the best environment for a kid for growing up / for a kid to grow up in.

Due to that, when the boy or girl reaches the legal age for working, they decide to escape and live on their owns means. Due to that, when the boy or girl reaches the legal age for working, they decide to escape and live on their own means.

3rd person singular of "to reach"

Due to that, when thea boy or (a) girl reaches the legal age for working, they decide to escape and live on their owns means. Due to that, when a boy or (a) girl reaches the legal age for working, they decide to escape and live on their own means.

Changed "the boy or girl" to "a boy or girl" to make it more general since I don't think you're talking about a specific kid

The second reason for dropping out theof school early, is finantcial difficulties. The second reason for dropping out of school early is financial difficulties.

The second reason for dropping out theof school early, is the finantcial difficulties. The second reason for dropping out of school early is the financial difficulties.

It is said that about 2/3two third of families suffering constant money issues have their childsren entering the laboral world market five years beforeearlier than wealthier families. It is said that about two third of families suffering constant money issues have children entering the labor market five years earlier than wealthier families.

Use words for figures in report. Plural of child is "children". I've left it as "labor" ie American English spelling.

It is said that about 2/3 of families suffering constant money issues have their childsren entering the laboralworking world five years before wealthier families. It is said that about 2/3 of families suffering constant money issues have their children entering the working world five years before wealthier families.

This dramatic situation has to be tackled by both the authorities and whole society in generalas a whole, because in the long term, it will lead to social desinequialities and, in the end, to a worste world. This dramatic situation has to be tackled by both the authorities and society as a whole, because in the long term, it will lead to social inequalities and, in the end, to a worse world.

"by" introduces who is tackling the problem. Opposite of "equalities" is "inequalities". English is not very consistent with these kind of prefixes. "worse" comparative rather than "worst" which is superlative.

This dramatic situation has to be tackled by both the authorities and by the whole society in general, because in the long term, it will lead to social desinequialities and, in the end, to a worste world. This dramatic situation has to be tackled by both the authorities and by the whole society, because in the long term, it will lead to social inequalities and, in the end, to a worse world.

OnThe first initiative to deal with this should be early detection at schools, before the situation becomes unsolvable. The first initiative to deal with this should be early detection at schools before the situation becomes unsolvable.

AndThe secondly, helping families both psicychologically and finantcially when necessary. The second, helping families both psychologically and financially when necessary.

And secondly, helping families both psicychologically and finantcially when necessary. And secondly, helping families both psychologically and financially when necessary.