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The tour plan

In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people. I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition . Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on. Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow". In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter. Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.


今日の授業では、外国人旅行客向けの東北地方の旅行プランについての大会が行われました。この大会に向けて、チームメイトと一緒にスライドや動画の作成をしてきました。それぞれのチームが独自のテーマを与えられており、例えば「地元のグルメ」「絶景」「日本の精神」などです。私たちのチームのテーマは「冬と雪」でした。東北地方は冬にたくさん雪が降ります。私たちのプランはたくさんの雪にまつわるアクティビティを含んでいます。スキー、氷の上でのワカサギ釣り、雪かき体験、地吹雪体験などです。

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The tour plan

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".

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In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.

I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition .

Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".

In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.

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The tour plan

Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

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Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

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I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition.


Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.


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Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".


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In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.


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Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.


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In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.


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