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Mana

Jan. 15, 2026

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The tour plan

In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people. I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition . Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on. Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow". In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter. Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.


今日の授業では、外国人旅行客向けの東北地方の旅行プランについての大会が行われました。この大会に向けて、チームメイトと一緒にスライドや動画の作成をしてきました。それぞれのチームが独自のテーマを与えられており、例えば「地元のグルメ」「絶景」「日本の精神」などです。私たちのチームのテーマは「冬と雪」でした。東北地方は冬にたくさん雪が降ります。私たちのプランはたくさんの雪にまつわるアクティビティを含んでいます。スキー、氷の上でのワカサギ釣り、雪かき体験、地吹雪体験などです。

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The tour plan

In today's class, we had a competition ofn creating tour plans in the Tohoku region for foreign peopleers.

I had prepared slides and videos with (my) teammates for this competition .

Each team had their own theme, like "Local HFood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".

In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow induring the winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencblizzard sightings.

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Well done!

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Mana

Jan. 17, 2026

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Thank you very much

The tTour pPlan

In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.

I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition .

Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".

In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.

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Mana

Jan. 17, 2026

2

Thank you!!

The tour plan

In today's class, we had a competition ofto make a tour plan inof the Tohoku region for foreign people.

I had prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .

Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".

In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.

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Sounds like a fun class! Most of the corrections were quite minor. Keep it up :)

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Mana

Jan. 15, 2026

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Thank you for your corrections! The team whose tour was titled “A Study Tour Focused on Traditional Food Culture” won the competition.

In today's class, we had a competition ofto create a tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.

"tour planning competition" works as well and has the same meaning as "competition to create a tour plan"---both are perfectly natural. The nuance of using each is that "____ competition" puts more emphasis on the competition, while "competition to ______" emphasizes the objective of the competition.

I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for ithis competition .

"this competition" fits but "it" is more natural since we can infer what "it" is from the last sentence.

Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.

Smelt fishing and snow shoveling work as noun phrases since "fishing" and "shoveling" are commonly-used nouns; "experiencing" unfortunately isn't very common to see that way.

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good work!

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Mana

Jan. 15, 2026

2

Thank you very much.

In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign peopleto create a tour plan for foreign visitors in the Tohoku region.

I had prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .

Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood"," "Breathtaking View"," "Japanese Spirits"," and so on.

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow"."

In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.

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Mana

Jan. 15, 2026

2

Thank you for your corrections!

In today's class, we had a competition of tour platour planning competition in Tohoku region for foreign people.

I hadl prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing of ground blizzards experiencing.

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Well done!

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Mana

Jan. 15, 2026

2

Thank you!

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In today's class, we had a conpetition of tour plan in Tohoku reagion for foregin people.


I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition.


Each team had their own theme, like "Local Hood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.


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Each team had their own theme, like "Local HFood", "Breathtaking View", "Japanese Spirits", and so on.

Our team's theme was " Winter and Snow".


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In Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow in winter.


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In the Tohoku reagion, we have a lot of snow induring the winter.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencing.


Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing of ground blizzards experiencing.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.

Smelt fishing and snow shoveling work as noun phrases since "fishing" and "shoveling" are commonly-used nouns; "experiencing" unfortunately isn't very common to see that way.

Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and experiencing ground blizzards experiencing.

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Our plan included many snow-related activities like skiing, smelt fishing on the ice, snow shoveling, and ground blizzards experiencblizzard sightings.

In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.


In today's class, we had a competition of tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign peopleto create a tour plan for foreign visitors in the Tohoku region.

In today's class, we had a competition of tour platour planning competition in Tohoku region for foreign people.

In today's class, we had a competition ofto create a tour plan in Tohoku region for foreign people.

"tour planning competition" works as well and has the same meaning as "competition to create a tour plan"---both are perfectly natural. The nuance of using each is that "____ competition" puts more emphasis on the competition, while "competition to ______" emphasizes the objective of the competition.

In today's class, we had a competition ofto make a tour plan inof the Tohoku region for foreign people.

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In today's class, we had a competition ofn creating tour plans in the Tohoku region for foreign peopleers.

I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for this competition .


I had prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .

I hadl prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .

I had prepared slides and videos with teammates for ithis competition .

"this competition" fits but "it" is more natural since we can infer what "it" is from the last sentence.

I had prepared slides and videos with my teammates for this competition .

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I had prepared slides and videos with (my) teammates for this competition .

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