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I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night:https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM
I talked about how it got its Chinese name 金银花, but actually, it has another name in Chinese 忍冬, which means “bearing through the winter.”This name came from its growth habit--it can keep growing even in cold winter.
When its flower buds are dried, they become a kind of traditional Chinese medicine that can clear heat and detoxify your body. Honeysuckle blooms at the perfect time in Eastern China. It goes after the summer days and comforts people with the medicinal tea.
I didn't pick the buds from my honeysuckle plant. The flowers smell so soothing and fill my apartment with fragrance. Instead, I bought some dried honeysuckle buds online and made herbal tea after dinner sometimes.
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I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM
I talked about how it got itsthe Chinese name 金银花, but actually, it has another name in Chinese, 忍冬, which means “bearing through the winter.”
I talked about how it got the Chinese name 金银花, but actually, it has another name in Chinese, 忍冬, which means “bearing through the winter.”
This name caomes from its growth habit--it canability to keep growing even in the cold of winter.
This name comes from its ability to keep growing even in the cold of winter.
When its flower buds are dried, they become a kind of traditional Chinese medicine that can clear heat and detoxify your body.
Honeysuckle blooms at the perfect time in Eeastern China.
Honeysuckle blooms at the perfect time in eastern China.
It [goes after] the summer days and comforts people with the medicinal tea.
It [goes after] the summer days and comforts people with medicinal tea.
“Goes after” seems to imply that it follows summer (blooms at the end summer), which can’t be right. :-) What meaning of “goes after” do you have in mind?
I didhaven't picked the buds (flowers?) from my honeysuckle plant.
I haven't picked the buds (flowers?) from my honeysuckle plant.
In botany, a bud is an undeveloped or embryonic shoot. Colloquially, we do call flowers “buds” sometimes, but in this case I’m not sure if you mean the undeveloped buds or the fully formed flowers.
The flowers smell so soothing and fill my apartment with fragrance.
Instead, I bought some dried honeysuckle buds (flowers?) online and madke herbal tea after dinner sometimes.
Instead, I bought some dried honeysuckle buds (flowers?) online and make herbal tea after dinner sometimes.
I changed “made” to “make” since it sounds like you still do this.
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I have fond childhood memories of plucking honeysuckle flowers and sucking their sweet nectar. :-)
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I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM
I talked about how it got its Chinese name 金银花, but actually, it has another name in Chinese 忍冬, which means “bearing through the winter.”
This name came from how its growth habit--is. It can keep growing even induring the cold winter.
This name came from how it grows. It can keep growing even during the cold winter.
What you wrote wasn’t wrong, this just sounds more natural.
When its flower buds are dried, they become a kind of traditional Chinese medicine that can clear heat and detoxify your body.
Honeysuckle blooms at the perfect time in Eastern China.
It goeblooms after the summer days and comforts people with the medicinal tea.
It blooms after the summer days and comforts people with the medicinal tea.
Last year, I didn't pick the buds from my honeysuckle plant. Last year, I didn't pick the buds from my honeysuckle plant.
The other sentences have been in present tense (it blooms, comforts). If you are going to transition to past tense, you need to warn the reader.
I put “Last year,” as an example of how to do that, but there are other ways. You can also make the sentence say “I don’t pick the buds . . .” if that is true every year.
The flowers smelled so soothing and filled my apartment with fragrance. The flowers smelled so soothing and filled my apartment with fragrance.
If you are talking about why you dind’t pick the flowers, keep it in the past tense!
Instead, I bought some dried honeysuckle buds online and made herbal tea after dinner sometimes.
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Now I want to learn more about honesuckle plants!
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I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night:https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM I created a video about my blooming honeysuckle last night: https://youtube.com/shorts/lZe2CwFAyzM |
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I talked about how it got its Chinese name 金银花, but actually, it has another name in Chinese 忍冬, which means “bearing through the winter.” This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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This name came from its growth habit--it can keep growing even in cold winter.
This name came from how it What you wrote wasn’t wrong, this just sounds more natural.
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When its flower buds are dried, they become a kind of traditional Chinese medicine that can clear heat and detoxify your body. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Honeysuckle blooms at the perfect time in Eastern China. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It goes after the summer days and comforts people with the medicinal tea.
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It [goes after] the summer days and comforts people with “Goes after” seems to imply that it follows summer (blooms at the end summer), which can’t be right. :-) What meaning of “goes after” do you have in mind? |
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I didn't pick the buds from my honeysuckle plant. Last year, I didn't pick the buds from my honeysuckle plant. Last year, I didn't pick the buds from my honeysuckle plant. The other sentences have been in present tense (it blooms, comforts). If you are going to transition to past tense, you need to warn the reader. I put “Last year,” as an example of how to do that, but there are other ways. You can also make the sentence say “I don’t pick the buds . . .” if that is true every year.
I In botany, a bud is an undeveloped or embryonic shoot. Colloquially, we do call flowers “buds” sometimes, but in this case I’m not sure if you mean the undeveloped buds or the fully formed flowers. |
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The flowers smell so soothing and fill my apartment with fragrance. The flowers smelled so soothing and filled my apartment with fragrance. The flowers smelled so soothing and filled my apartment with fragrance. If you are talking about why you dind’t pick the flowers, keep it in the past tense! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Instead, I bought some dried honeysuckle buds online and made herbal tea after dinner sometimes. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Instead, I bought some dried honeysuckle buds (flowers?) online and ma I changed “made” to “make” since it sounds like you still do this. |
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