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Tina_

Sept. 2, 2023

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Favourite festival

Dear Liza,

I’m so sorry that I didn’t write earlier for you, but I was really busy. I hope you’re fine and everything is okay.
I was thinking about how long time we didn’t see each other. Because of it I would be happy if you visit me in autumn during the Sausage Festival.
In my city it is the biggest festival and there are arrived from everywhere in this time. This Festival are always organized in October of the given year.
My family is there almost in every years, but I couldn’t go in the last years because of university. Fortunatelly, in this years I will have less lectures so I can be present at the event.
There are plenty of candies, fruits, chocolates there and you can choose from several types of alcohols. You can drink a mug of beer or a glass of wine. Additionally, you can eat sausage or other delicious food. But I think the most fascinating thing that you can see lots of handcrafted products such as clothes and shoes with Hungarian patterns, small blanket, masks and even more other.
Also I’d grateful if you come here. I hope see you later.

Best wishes

Your friend,
Clara

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Favourite festival

Dear Liza,

I’m so sorry that I didn’t write this earlier for you, but I was really busy.

I hope you’re fine and everything is okay.

I was thinking about how long time we didn’it's been since we've last seen each other.

Because of ithat, I would be happy if you could visit me in autumn during the Sausage Festival.

In my city it is the biggest festival and there are arrived from everywherin my city and people from all over the world come to see int this time of the year.

This Ffestival areis always organized in October of the giveneach year.

My family is there almost in every years, but I couldn’t go in the last years because of university.

Fortunatelly, in this years I will have lessfewer lectures so I can be present atthis year so I can go to the event.

Less is used for things that can't be counted, like "less effort" and "less power". Fewer is used for things that can be counted, like "fewer hours" and "fewer books".

There arwill be plenty of candies, fruits, and chocolates there, and you can choose from several types of alcohols.

You can drink a mug of beer or a glass of wine.

Additionally, you can eat sausages or other delicious food.

But I think the most fascinating thing is that you can see lots of handcrafted products such as clothes and shoes with Hungarian patterns, small blankets, masks and even more other.

Also I’d grateful if you come here.I’d happy to see you visit sometime!

I think "also" is unnecessary here.

I hope to see you latersoon.

Best wishes Your friend, Clara

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Other than a few stylistic changes, I didn't have to change much. Great job! I hope you can meet with your friend once again.

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Tina_

Sept. 6, 2023

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Thank you very much for your help and advice! :)

Favourite fFestival

Dear Liza,


I’m so sorry that I didn’t write earlier
forto you, but I was really busy.

I was thinking about how long time we didn’it’s been since we last seeaw each other.

Because of ithis, I would be happy if you would come visit me in autumn during the Sausage Festival.

In my city it is the biggest festival and there are arrived from everywhere inpeople from many places come to visit around this time.

This Ffestival areis always organized in October of the giveneach year.

My family is theregoes almost in every years, but I couldn’t go in the last few years because of university.

Or “couple of years”

Fortunatelly, iny this years, I will have less lectures so I can be present at the event.

There are plenty of candies, fruits, and chocolates there, and you can choose from several types of alcohols.

You can even drink a mug of beer or a glass of wine.

But I think the most fascinating thing that you can see are a lots of handcrafted products such as clothes and shoes with Hungarian patterns, small blankets, masks and even more otherother things.

Also, I’d be grateful if you come here.

I hope to see you later.

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Minor corrections, great job~!

Tina_'s avatar
Tina_

Sept. 6, 2023

1

I am grateful for the corrections! Thank you so much! :)

Favourite festival


Favourite fFestival

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Dear Liza, I’m so sorry that I didn’t write earlier for you, but I was really busy.


Dear Liza,


I’m so sorry that I didn’t write earlier
forto you, but I was really busy.

Dear Liza,

I’m so sorry that I didn’t write this earlier for you, but I was really busy.

I hope you’re fine and everything is okay.


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I was thinking about how long time we didn’t see each other.


I was thinking about how long time we didn’it’s been since we last seeaw each other.

I was thinking about how long time we didn’it's been since we've last seen each other.

Because of it I would be happy if you visit me in autumn during the Sausage Festival.


Because of ithis, I would be happy if you would come visit me in autumn during the Sausage Festival.

Because of ithat, I would be happy if you could visit me in autumn during the Sausage Festival.

In my city it is the biggest festival and there are arrived from everywhere in this time.


In my city it is the biggest festival and there are arrived from everywhere inpeople from many places come to visit around this time.

In my city it is the biggest festival and there are arrived from everywherin my city and people from all over the world come to see int this time of the year.

This Festival are always organized in October of the given year.


This Ffestival areis always organized in October of the giveneach year.

This Ffestival areis always organized in October of the giveneach year.

My family is there almost in every years, but I couldn’t go in the last years because of university.


My family is theregoes almost in every years, but I couldn’t go in the last few years because of university.

Or “couple of years”

My family is there almost in every years, but I couldn’t go in the last years because of university.

Fortunatelly, in this years I will have less lectures so I can be present at the event.


Fortunatelly, iny this years, I will have less lectures so I can be present at the event.

Fortunatelly, in this years I will have lessfewer lectures so I can be present atthis year so I can go to the event.

Less is used for things that can't be counted, like "less effort" and "less power". Fewer is used for things that can be counted, like "fewer hours" and "fewer books".

There are plenty of candies, fruits, chocolates there and you can choose from several types of alcohols.


There are plenty of candies, fruits, and chocolates there, and you can choose from several types of alcohols.

There arwill be plenty of candies, fruits, and chocolates there, and you can choose from several types of alcohols.

You can drink a mug of beer or a glass of wine.


You can even drink a mug of beer or a glass of wine.

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Additionally, you can eat sausage or other delicious food.


Additionally, you can eat sausages or other delicious food.

But I think the most fascinating thing that you can see lots of handcrafted products such as clothes and shoes with Hungarian patterns, small blanket, masks and even more other.


But I think the most fascinating thing that you can see are a lots of handcrafted products such as clothes and shoes with Hungarian patterns, small blankets, masks and even more otherother things.

But I think the most fascinating thing is that you can see lots of handcrafted products such as clothes and shoes with Hungarian patterns, small blankets, masks and even more other.

Also I’d grateful if you come here.


Also, I’d be grateful if you come here.

Also I’d grateful if you come here.I’d happy to see you visit sometime!

I think "also" is unnecessary here.

I hope see you later.


I hope to see you later.

I hope to see you latersoon.

Best wishes Your friend, Clara


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