Feb. 10, 2022
Favorite TV Shows
Actually, I don't like watching TV show except I was a college student.
At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alone for the first time in my life, and there was no friend where I lived.
With my computer that had a TV signal receiver, I spent a lot of time watching TV programs.
My favorite TV shows were Japanese dramas.
One of my friends guided how to watch Japanese dramas easily.
With good stories and special actors in the dramas were interesting for me.
I sometimes miss that time.
Favorite TV Shows
AI actually, I don't never liked watching TV (shows) except for when I was a college student.
At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alone for the first time in my life, and there wasI had no friends where I lived.
With my computer that had a TV signal receiver, I spent a lot of time watching TV programs.
My favorite TV shows were Japanese dramas.
One of my friends guidedtaught me how to watch Japanese dramas easily.
Or: One of my friends showed me how to watch Japanese dramas easily.
With good stories and special actors in, the dramas were interesting for me.
I sometimes miss that time.
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Do you watch any shows nowadays? Great job! :)
Feb. 11, 2022
Thank you so much. Unfortunatelly, I don't watch any show.
ActuI normally, I don't like watching TV show excepts. However, I did when I was a college student.
At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alone for the first time in my life, and there was noI have not one friend where I lived.
With mMy computer that had a TV signal receiver, so I spent a lot of time watching TV programs.
One of my friends guidedtaught me how to watch Japanese dramas easily.
WithI found that its good stories and special actors in the dramas were interesting for me.
I would replace good with something more specific: compelling, engaging, exciting
I sometimes miss that time.
Alt: I sometimes miss those times.
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Great job! I enjoy reading your journals.
Feb. 11, 2022
Thank you so much.
Actually, I don't like watching TV show except I was a college studentaside from when I was a college student, I don't really like watching TV shows.
I switched the clauses in the sentence to sound more natural.
At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alonewas away from my family for the first time in my life, and there was noI didn't have friends where I lived.
"I was so lonely because I lived alone" is a little repetitive in English, so I changed it to "I was so lonely because I was away from my family."
With my computer that had a TV signal receiver, I spent a lot of time watching TV programsBecause of that, I spent a lot of time watching TV programs with my computer that had a TV signal receiver.
I switched the clauses in the sentence to sound more natural. I also added, "Because of that" at the beginning, but the sentence would be fine without that phrase (it's a stylistic choice on my part.)
My favorite TV shows were Japanese dramas.
One of my friends guidedshowed me how to watch Japanese dramas easily.
WithThe dramas had good stories and special actors in the dramas, and were interesting forto me.
I sometimes miss that time.
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잘 했습니다! 저도 티비를 별로 좋아하지 않아요. 저는 티비 프로그램보다 음악을 좋아해요.
Feb. 10, 2022
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Actually, I don't like watching TV show except I was a college student. Actually, I switched the clauses in the sentence to sound more natural.
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At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alone for the first time in my life, and there was no friend where I lived. At that time, I was so lonely because I "I was so lonely because I lived alone" is a little repetitive in English, so I changed it to "I was so lonely because I was away from my family." At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alone for the first time in my life, and there At that time, I was so lonely because I lived alone for the first time in my life, and |
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With my computer that had a TV signal receiver, I spent a lot of time watching TV programs.
I switched the clauses in the sentence to sound more natural. I also added, "Because of that" at the beginning, but the sentence would be fine without that phrase (it's a stylistic choice on my part.)
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My favorite TV shows were Japanese dramas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One of my friends guided how to watch Japanese dramas easily. One of my friends One of my friends One of my friends Or: One of my friends showed me how to watch Japanese dramas easily. |
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With good stories and special actors in the dramas were interesting for me.
I would replace good with something more specific: compelling, engaging, exciting With good stories and special actors |
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I sometimes miss that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I sometimes miss that time. Alt: I sometimes miss those times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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