July 8, 2021
Favorite Smells
Everyone has his favorite smells. Sometimes, a smell is favorable for a person, but the smell is unpleasant for another one. When it comes to me, my favorite ones are orange, mint, and Coke, which I think are refreshing. The other ones I like are not popular; they are a gas station, a dog's head, and a corrosion inhibitor. When I go to a gas station, I take a breath enjoying the smell of gasoline even though I know gasoline is an organic solvent and toxic to humans. The second one, I had a Shiba dog and I often sniffed his top of the head. It wasn't a good smell but I liked it for no reason. The corrosion inhibitor is similar to gasoline. However, I don't like all of them but only a particular one. The name is "KURE 3-36" and its smell is indescribable. It's a chemical odor but is also fresh fruit-like. I think I can't explain because smell is qualia.
Everyone has histheir favorite smells.
The other ones I like are not as popular; they are a gas station, a dog's head, and a corrosion inhibitor.
When I go to a gas station, I take a breath to enjoying the smell of gasoline even though I know that gasoline is an organic solvent and toxic to humans.
The second one, I had a Shiba dog and I often sniffed histhe top of thehis head.
um sorry is it "had" or "have"? because "had" is past tense and it just gives off the vibe that you no longer have the dog...?
It wasn't a good smell but I liked it for no reason.
not necessarily wrong but the "for no reason" is a bit abundant if you're striving for a concise style of writing. otherwise, it's fine.
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Hi:) Your favorite scents are so interesting! Thank you for sharing this! Good luck on your journey~
July 10, 2021
Thank you for your corrections!
Favorite Smells
Everyone has histheir favorite smellscent.
"They/Them/Their" is better for when you're talking about more than one person.
"Scent" I think works better.
Sometimes, a smell is favorable for a person, but the smell is unpleasant for another one.
When it comes to me, my favorite ones are orange, mint, and Coke, which I think are refreshing.
The other ones I like are not as popular; they are a: like gas stations, a dog's heads, and a particular corrosion inhibitor.
This sounds more natural.
When I go to a gas station, I take a breath, enjoying the smell of gasoline, even though I know that gasoline is an organic solvent and toxic to humans.
The second one, I had a Shiba dog and I often sniffed histhe top of thehis head.
It wasn't a good smell but I liked it for no reason.
The corrosion inhibitor is similar to gasoline.
However, I don't like all of them but only a particular one.
TheIts name is "KURE 3-36" and its smell is indescribable.
It's a chemical odor but is also fresh fruit-like.
I think I can't explain because smell is qualia.
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I like the smell of oranges, mint, and gasoline too haha :)
Great writing! It was very interesting.
July 10, 2021
Thank you so much!
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Everyone has his favorite smells. Everyone has "They/Them/Their" is better for when you're talking about more than one person. "Scent" I think works better. Everyone has |
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Sometimes, a smell is favorable for a person, but the smell is unpleasant for another one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When it comes to me, my favorite ones are orange, mint, and Coke, which I think are refreshing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The other ones I like are not popular; they are a gas station, a dog's head, and a corrosion inhibitor. The other ones I like are not as popular This sounds more natural. The other ones I like are not as popular; they are a gas station, a dog's head, and a corrosion inhibitor. |
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When I go to a gas station, I take a breath enjoying the smell of gasoline even though I know gasoline is an organic solvent and toxic to humans. When I go to a gas station, I take a breath, enjoying the smell of gasoline, even though I know that gasoline is an organic solvent and toxic to humans. When I go to a gas station, I take a breath to enjoy |
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The second one, I had a Shiba dog and I often sniffed his top of the head. The second one, I had a Shiba dog and I often sniffed The second one, I had a Shiba dog and I often sniffed um sorry is it "had" or "have"? because "had" is past tense and it just gives off the vibe that you no longer have the dog...? |
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However, I don't like all of them but only a particular one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The name is "KURE 3-36" and its smell is indescribable.
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It's a chemical odor but is also fresh fruit-like. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think I can't explain because smell is qualia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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