Feb. 18, 2021
Fat Pets
I usually watch funny videos about cute animals on YouTube. Sometimes I see a fat cat or dog. I think they are cuter but letting them fat is not good for them. Fatness causes injuries or earlier death. Fat animals hurt their legs and waist due to their own weight. Obesity irritates internal organs same as humans. Humans can reduce their body fat and weight by exercise, but animals can't do so because the energy that they gain from foods is more than the energy that they consume with exercise. Animals don't understand what are healthy diets and eat instinctively as possible. Therefore, I think their owner has a responsibility to control their body weight.
Fat Pets
I usually watch funny videos aboutof cute animals on YouTube.
Your original is fine, but this is slightly more natural
Sometimes I see a fat cat or dog.
I think they are cuter but letting them become fat is not good for them.
FatnessBeing fat causes injuries orand can lead to an earlier death.
Fat animals hurt their legs and waist due to their own weight.
Obesity irritatdamges internal organs which is the same asfor humans.
Humans can reduce their body fat and weight bythrough exercise, but animals can't do so because the energy that they gain from foods is more than the energy that they consumeexpend with exercise.
'consume' is unnatural in this context.
Animals don't understand what are healthy diets and eatre and instinctively eats as much as possible.
Therefore, I think their owner has a responsibility to control their body weight.
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Interesting post! I agree, pet owners should really keep their pets from becoming overweight.
Feb. 19, 2021
Thank you for your correction!
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Fat Pets This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually watch funny videos about cute animals on YouTube. I usually watch funny videos Your original is fine, but this is slightly more natural |
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Sometimes I see a fat cat or dog. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think they are cuter but letting them fat is not good for them. I think they are cuter but letting them become fat is not good for them. |
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Fatness causes injuries or earlier death.
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Fat animals hurt their legs and waist due to their own weight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Obesity irritates internal organs same as humans. Obesity |
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Humans can reduce their body fat and weight by exercise, but animals can't do so because the energy that they gain from foods is more than the energy that they consume with exercise. Humans can reduce their body fat and weight 'consume' is unnatural in this context. |
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Animals don't understand what are healthy diets and eat instinctively as possible. Animals don't understand what |
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Therefore, I think their owner has a responsibility to control their body weight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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