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Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC. Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history. This was actually a policy pursuing prosperity and strengthening the interests of the nation but simultaneously weakening individual influence. The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized country in China. Unfortunately, Shang Yang’s ideas have lasted to this day. His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators

Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China. At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, this was another kind of democracy I think. Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread. Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread. The interesting thing is, the Japanese only learned from these two dynasties in ancient China. Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, go to Japan is the perfect choice.

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Qin dynasty, however, won won from battles fromto battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Chinese history textbook concluded that one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.

His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators
.
Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, t. This was another kind of democracy, I think.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 14, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! 😊.

Qin dynasty, however, won battles from after battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Is “won battle after battle” what you mean?

Chinese history textbooks concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known [in history | by historians] as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history."

This was actually a policy pursuing prosperity and strengthening the interests of the nation but simultaneously weakening individual influence.

The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized countrystate in China.

Unfortunately, Shang Yang’s ideas have lasted to this day.

His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become trulye dictators



The
Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

“Attractive” to whom?

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 14, 2023

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Qin dynasty, however, won battles from after battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

In the fights with other kingdoms, Qin won battle after battle.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 14, 2023

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His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become trulye dictators



The
Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

Attractive to me, and like most other people, I also enjoy its positive aspects.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 14, 2023

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Thank you very much! 😊

The Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

The Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.

At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites,; this was another kind of democracy I think.

Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, and private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.

Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, going to Japan is the perfect choice.

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Scarlett_Father

Sept. 14, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! 😊

Fascinating History (2)


Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.


The Qin dynasty, however, won battles from battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Qin dynasty, however, won battles from after battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Is “won battle after battle” what you mean?

Qin dynasty, however, won won from battles fromto battles and eventually united China in 221 BC.

Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.


The Chinese history textbook concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.

Chinese history textbooks concluded one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known [in history | by historians] as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history."

Chinese history textbook concluded that one of the main reasons was that this inland kingdom had strictly implemented a policy led by Shang Yang, known as "Shang Yang’s Reform" in history.

This was actually a policy pursuing prosperity and strengthening the interests of the nation but simultaneously weakening individual influence.


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The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized country in China.


The reform has proved to be effective, and Qin became the first empire that created a centralized countrystate in China.

Unfortunately, Shang Yang’s ideas have lasted to this day.


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His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.


His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become trulye dictators



The
Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

“Attractive” to whom?

His ideas also weakened the elites' interests and made the top leaders or emperors become truly dictators
.
Tang Dynasty (618 to 907) and Song Dynasty (960–1279) were the most attractive, and prosperous in ancient China.

At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, this was another kind of democracy I think.


At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites,; this was another kind of democracy I think.

At their peak times, both the emperors of the different periods respected and adopted the suggestions from elites, t. This was another kind of democracy, I think.

Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.


Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.


Especially in the Song Dynasty, this country was indeed drawn into a free economic market, and private economies were extremely powerful and widespread.

The interesting thing is, the Japanese only learned from these two dynasties in ancient China.


Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, go to Japan is the perfect choice.


Today, many people are being suggested: if you want to discover or enjoy Tang and Song cultures, going to Japan is the perfect choice.

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