Sept. 13, 2023
Fascinated History in Dreams (1)
I like history more than other subjects, I am a history buff. China's history has been brimmed with charming and fascinating stories over 3,000 years; one of the main reasons is this land is in the north 30 degrees of the equator, around areas in this specific degree in the world, more other famous human civilizations also created, the climate in these places are most suitable for growing human beings and other living creatures.
About 2,500 years ago, China was in Spring and Autumn period. Many philosophers expressed, spoke, and debated freely in the regions around the Yangtze River and Huang He River. They were ruled by different kingdoms which were similar to current European countries. The idea of Confucianism came out, developed and accepted by their offsprings, and even influenced other Asian countries, such as Japan, Korea, and Southeast countries. At the same time, many books about the military, agriculture, industry, and literature were also written out, though on the bamboo slips.
I like history more than any other subjects, I am a history buff.
China's history has been brimmed with charming and fascinating stories of over 3,000 years; one of the main reasons is that this land is in the north 30 degrees of the equator, around areas in this specific degree in the world, more other famous human civilizations also created, t. The climate in these places are most suitable for growing human beings and other living creatures.
Sept. 14, 2023
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Fascinated History in Dreams (1)
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. What is the connection between history and dreams?
I like history more than other subjects,; I am a history buff.
Close! But use ";" instead of "," if they can be two separate sentences.
China's history has been brimmed with charming and fascinating stories for over 3,000 years; o. One of the main reasons is that this land is in the north 30 degrees north of the equator, around areas in this specific degree in the world, mowhere other famous human civilizations alsohave also been created, as the climate in these places aris the most suitable for growing human beings and other living creatures.
All of this is too long to be 1 sentence. I deleted parts that didn't add to your writing. You don't "grow" human beings, only plants.
About 2,500 years ago, China was in the Spring and Autumn period.
Many philosophers expressed, spoke, and debated freely in the regions around the Yangtze River and Huang He River.
They were ruled by different kingdoms which were similar to current European countries.
The idea of Confucianism came out, developed and accepted by their offspringschildren, and even influenced other Asian countries, such as Japan, Korea, and Southeastthe countries in Southeast Asia.
We would typically only use the word "offspring" for humans if we were talking about something in a scientific way, such as talking about genetics.
AtDuring the same time, many books about the military, agriculture, industry, and literature were also written out, though on the bamboo slips.
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Sept. 13, 2023
Fascinated History in Dreams (1)
Thank you! Maybe "Fascinating History" is better.
Sept. 13, 2023
Thank you! Maybe "Fascinating History" is better.
That works perfectly!
Sept. 13, 2023
Thank you for your corrections and comments! 😊
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Fascinated History in Dreams (1)
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. What is the connection between history and dreams? |
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I like history more than other subjects, I am a history buff. I like history more than other subjects Close! But use ";" instead of "," if they can be two separate sentences. I like history more than any other subjects, I am a history buff. |
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China's history has been brimmed with charming and fascinating stories over 3,000 years; one of the main reasons is this land is in the north 30 degrees of the equator, around areas in this specific degree in the world, more other famous human civilizations also created, the climate in these places are most suitable for growing human beings and other living creatures. China's history has All of this is too long to be 1 sentence. I deleted parts that didn't add to your writing. You don't "grow" human beings, only plants. China's history has been brimmed with charming and fascinating stories of over 3,000 years; one of the main reasons is that this land is in the north 30 degrees of the equator, around areas in this specific degree in the world, more other famous human civilizations also created |
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About 2,500 years ago, China was in Spring and Autumn period. About 2,500 years ago, China was in the Spring and Autumn period. |
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Many philosophers expressed, spoke, and debated freely in the regions around the Yangtze River and Huang He River. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They were ruled by different kingdoms which were similar to current European countries. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The idea of Confucianism came out, developed and accepted by their offsprings, and even influenced other Asian countries, such as Japan, Korea, and Southeast countries. The idea of Confucianism came out, developed and accepted by their We would typically only use the word "offspring" for humans if we were talking about something in a scientific way, such as talking about genetics. |
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At the same time, many books about the military, agriculture, industry, and literature were also written out, though on the bamboo slips.
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