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My parents are in their fourties. Both my mom and dad are 42 years old. I love my parents very much. They are funny and I feel good with them. But sometimes they are very strict. If I meet friends they want me to be home by 8 pm. And they don't let me go to school in clothes that I like. They are strict, but I know that they only do this for my good and because they are worried about me.
Usaully it is my mother who i get on better with. She is very understanding and helps me with a lot of good advice. I also talk to my father about problems, but less often because he works a lot.
My parents get on well with each other. They discuss everything together, if they don’t have the same opinion, they try to reach an agreement without an argument. They love each other and they love me very much. They are very nice parnts.

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My parents are in their fourtie40s.

fourties is still correct, but usually in written form, it is written with the number + s

Both my mom and dad are 42 years old.

I love my parents very much.

They are funny and I feel goodcomfortable with them.

good is too general and not descriptive of what you feel.
I put comfortable but I'm unsure if the best word to express what you mean.

But sometimes they are very strict.

If I meetWhen I'm meeting with friends, they want me to be home by 8 pm.

"If" in this context, feels like the situation had not happened before, but there is a possibility.
"When" in this context fits better, because it has happened before.

And they don't let me go to school in clothes that I like.

They are strict, but I know that they are only doing this for my goodsake and because they are worried about me.

Usaully it is my mother who i get on better with.

She is very understanding and helps me withgives me a lot of goodhelpful advice.

I also talk to my father about my problems, but less often because he works a lot.

My parents get on well with each other.

They discuss everything together, i. If they don’t have the same opinion, then they try to reach an agreement without an argument.

Seems more natural to have a full-stop there

They love each other and they love me very much.

They are very nice parents.

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My parents are in their fourties.


My parents are in their fourtie40s.

fourties is still correct, but usually in written form, it is written with the number + s

Both my mom and dad are 42 years old.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love my parents very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They are funny and I feel good with them.


They are funny and I feel goodcomfortable with them.

good is too general and not descriptive of what you feel. I put comfortable but I'm unsure if the best word to express what you mean.

But sometimes they are very strict.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I meet friends they want me to be home by 8 pm.


If I meetWhen I'm meeting with friends, they want me to be home by 8 pm.

"If" in this context, feels like the situation had not happened before, but there is a possibility. "When" in this context fits better, because it has happened before.

And they don't let me go to school in clothes that I like.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They are strict, but I know that they only do this for my good and because they are worried about me.


They are strict, but I know that they are only doing this for my goodsake and because they are worried about me.

Usaully it is my mother who i get on better with.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She is very understanding and helps me with a lot of good advice.


She is very understanding and helps me withgives me a lot of goodhelpful advice.

I also talk to my father about problems, but less often because he works a lot.


I also talk to my father about my problems, but less often because he works a lot.

My parents get on well with each other.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They discuss everything together, if they don’t have the same opinion, they try to reach an agreement without an argument.


They discuss everything together, i. If they don’t have the same opinion, then they try to reach an agreement without an argument.

Seems more natural to have a full-stop there

They love each other and they love me very much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They are very nice parnts.


They are very nice parents.

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