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Nov. 4, 2020

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It's getting cold in my city. My feet are always cold, but I don't like wear socks. I spend barefoot all the time at home. So, I use an electric blanket to warm my feet in my bed. It's so comfortable, I can't stop falling asleep, then I take a nap everyday.

私の街もだんだん寒くなってきました。私は冷え性でいつも足が冷たいです。でも、家にいるときは靴下を履きたくないのでいつも裸足でいます。だから、お布団の中で電気毛布を使って足を温めてます。気持ち良くて毎日お昼寝をしてしまいます。

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It's getting cold in my city.

My feet are always cold, but I don't like wearing socks.

I spend barefoot all the timeam usually barefoot at home.

So, I use an electric blanket to warm my feet in my bed.

It's so comfortable, that I can't stop falling asleep, thenso I take a nap every day.

"everyday" means ordinary or commonplace
"every day" denotes something that happens each day

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thinkmore

Nov. 10, 2020

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Thank you so much :D

It's getting cold in my city.

My feet are always cold, but I don't like to wear socks.

I spendam barefoot all the time at home.

So, I use an electric blanket to warm my feet in my bed.

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thinkmore

Nov. 4, 2020

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Thank you so much!

falling asleep


fFalling aAsleep

It's getting cold in my city.


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My feet are always cold, but I don't like wear socks.


My feet are always cold, but I don't like to wear socks.

My feet are always cold, but I don't like wearing socks.

I spend bearfoot all the time at home.


So, I use electric blanket to warm my feet in my bed.


It's so comfortable, I can't stop falling asleep, then I take a nap everyday.


It's so comfortable, that I can't stop falling asleep, thenso I take a nap every day.

"everyday" means ordinary or commonplace "every day" denotes something that happens each day

私の街もだんだん寒くなってきました。私は冷え性でいつも足が冷たいです。でも、家にいるときは靴下を履きたくないのでいつも裸足でいます。だから、お布団の中で電気毛布を使って足を温めてます。気持ち良くて毎日お昼寝をしてしまいます。


I spend barefoot all the time at home.


I spendam barefoot all the time at home.

I spend barefoot all the timeam usually barefoot at home.

So, I use an electric blanket to warm my feet in my bed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, I use an electric blanket to warm my feet in my bed.

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