Sept. 6, 2020
Fall
I love fall.There are many delicious foods such as chestnuts, pears, sweet potatoes and pumpkins.Pumpkin is summer food, but the image of autumn is strong because of the Halloween Either way, it's the fall of the appetite!
Fall
I love fall. There are many delicious foods such as chestnuts, pears, sweet potatoes, and pumpkins. Pumpkin is a summer food, but the image of autumn is strong because of the Halloween. Either way, it's the fall of the appetite!
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Very good and original :)
Sept. 6, 2020
Thank you! I forgot to leave some spaces.
Fall
I love fall. There are many delicious autumn foods such as chestnuts, pears, sweet potatoes and pumpkins. Pumpkin iss are a summer food, buyet their image as part of autumn is strong because of the Halloween. Either way, it's the fall of the appetite!
Translating 食欲の秋 (which I think is what your last sentence is going for) is kind of hard in English. I understand what your sentence is trying to say, but it might sound more natural in English as: "Either way, fall is the season of the appetite!"
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Good job! I like fall too, but mostly because summer is way too hot. Let me know if you have questions about my corrections.
Sept. 6, 2020
Thank you for your corrections! It's easy to understand for me.
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I love fall.There are many delicious foods such as chestnuts, pears, potatoes and pumpkins.Pumpkin is summer food, but the image of autumn is strong because of the Halloween Either way, it's the fall of the appetite! |
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I love fall.There are many delicious foods such as chestnuts, pears, sweet potatoes and pumpkins.Pumpkin is summer food, but the image of autumn is strong because of the Halloween Either way, it's the fall of the appetite! I love fall. There are many delicious autumn foods such as chestnuts, pears, sweet potatoes and pumpkins. Pumpkin Translating 食欲の秋 (which I think is what your last sentence is going for) is kind of hard in English. I understand what your sentence is trying to say, but it might sound more natural in English as: "Either way, fall is the season of the appetite!" I love fall. There are many delicious foods such as chestnuts, pears, sweet potatoes, and pumpkins. Pumpkin is a summer food, but the image of autumn is strong because of A tip: add spaces between sentences. This is required in English, and it allows LangCorrect to separate each sentence. |
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