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Nov. 25, 2022

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Fairytales

When I was a little girl fairytales was great for me. I love all the adventures and the movies .The Stories was always so exited to me with the magic and the Mystery.But the best is the romantic with the beautiful dresses and balls.My favourite part was always when they come together and married.I mean in the real life it takes more than a adventure or dance.The real life is difficult and sometimes sad or mean.In the fairytales is it love on the first met and some.Sometimes I wish the live is as a fairytale with magic. When I was little I wish I have magical powers.But all that I can do it is to give my best.Then I can wait for a miracle. Yourself make a miracle.


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When I was a little girl, I thought fairytales wasere great for me.

I love all the adventures, and the movies .The Sstories wasere always so exciteding to me, with the magic and the Mmystery. But the best is the romantice with the beautiful dresses and balls.
My favourite part was always when they comeget together and get married. I mean, in the real life it takes more than an adventure or a dance.The r Real life is difficult and sometimes sad or mean. In the fairytales, ist its love on the first met and some.at first sight. Sometimes I wish theI could live isn as a magical fairytale with magic.

Great work here!

When I was little, I wish I haveed for magical powers. But all that I can do it is to givetry my best.T, and then I can wait for a miracle.

Yourself make a miracles yourself.

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Excellent work! Great writing :)

I love all the adventures and the movies . The Stories wasere always so exiteding to me, with their magic and the Mmystery. But the best isof all were the romantic scenes, with the beautiful dresses and balls. My favourite part was always when they come[the couple] got together and married. I mean in the real life ithis takes more than an adventure or dance.The Finding true love in real life is difficult and sometimes sad or mean. In the fairy tales ist its love on theat first mesight and some.Sometimes even now I wish the live is aswere more like a fairy tale with this kind of magic.

got together describes couples starting a relationship - how long has it been since the prince and princess got together?
come together is any meeting of people - let's come together and celebrate your birthday
to have a get-together - i.e. a party

an adventure, not a adventure - to know when to use a or an, remember that a is used for words that sound like they start with a consonant.

When I was little, I wished I haved magical powers. But all that I can do itnow, is to give my best.Then I can, instead of waiting for a miracle.

You yourself make athe miracle happen.

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Good job!

When I was a little girl fairytales wasere great for me.

Fairytales


When I was a little girl fairytales was great for me.


When I was a little girl fairytales wasere great for me.

When I was a little girl, I thought fairytales wasere great for me.

I love all the adventures and the movies .The Stories was always so exited to me with the magic and the Mystery.But the best is the romantic with the beautiful dresses and balls.My favourite part was always when they come together and married.I mean in the real life it takes more than a adventure or dance.The real life is difficult and sometimes sad or mean.In the fairytales is it love on the first met and some.Sometimes I wish the live is as a fairytale with magic.


I love all the adventures and the movies . The Stories wasere always so exiteding to me, with their magic and the Mmystery. But the best isof all were the romantic scenes, with the beautiful dresses and balls. My favourite part was always when they come[the couple] got together and married. I mean in the real life ithis takes more than an adventure or dance.The Finding true love in real life is difficult and sometimes sad or mean. In the fairy tales ist its love on theat first mesight and some.Sometimes even now I wish the live is aswere more like a fairy tale with this kind of magic.

got together describes couples starting a relationship - how long has it been since the prince and princess got together? come together is any meeting of people - let's come together and celebrate your birthday to have a get-together - i.e. a party an adventure, not a adventure - to know when to use a or an, remember that a is used for words that sound like they start with a consonant.

I love all the adventures, and the movies .The Sstories wasere always so exciteding to me, with the magic and the Mmystery. But the best is the romantice with the beautiful dresses and balls.
My favourite part was always when they comeget together and get married. I mean, in the real life it takes more than an adventure or a dance.The r Real life is difficult and sometimes sad or mean. In the fairytales, ist its love on the first met and some.at first sight. Sometimes I wish theI could live isn as a magical fairytale with magic.

Great work here!

When I was little I wish I have magical powers.But all that I can do it is to give my best.Then I can wait for a miracle.


When I was little, I wished I haved magical powers. But all that I can do itnow, is to give my best.Then I can, instead of waiting for a miracle.

When I was little, I wish I haveed for magical powers. But all that I can do it is to givetry my best.T, and then I can wait for a miracle.

Yourself make a miracle.


You yourself make athe miracle happen.

Yourself make a miracles yourself.

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