June 21, 2021
Fairy Tale" Urashima Taro"
Long ago, there is a man who named Urashima Taro. One day, he saw that children bullied a turtle and he saved it. The turtle appreciated to Taro and took him to Ryugu Castle in the sea as his in return.
In Ryugu Castle, there is a beautiful princess whose name is Otohime and she was very hospitable to Taro. He had been enjoying and spent a wonderful time with her. But he told her that he would like to return to his town. Then, Otohime gave him a "Urashima's Casket" and noticed him not to open it.
When he got on the ground, there was no house which used be there and nobody lived he knew. He looked over everywhere and asked people and found out that it has past outrageous time during he was in Ryugu Castle.
Furthermore, he forgot Otohime's warning and opened "Urashima's Casket". White smoke came up inside of it and he suddenly became an old man with full of wrinkles and white hair.
Fairy Tale" "Urashima Taro"
Long ago, there iwas a man who named Urashima Taro.
"who was named" is another correct way to say it.
One day, he saw that children bulliedying a turtle and he saved it.
The turtle appreciatedwas grateful to Taro and took him to Ryugu Castle in the sea as his in return.
In Ryugu Castle, there iwas a beautiful princess whose name iwas Otohime and she was very hospitable to Taro.
He had been enjoying himself and spent a wonderful time with her.
But he told her that he would like to return to his town.
Then, Otohime gave him a "Urashima's Casket" and noticwarned him not to open it.
When he got on the grouback to land, there was no house which used be there and nobody livedthat he knew still lived.
He looked over everywhere and asked people and found out that it has past outrageous time duringoutrageous amounts of time had passed while he was in Ryugu Castle.
Furthermore, he forgot Otohime's warning and opened "Urashima's Casket".
White smoke came up from inside of it and he suddenly became an old man with full of wrinkles and white hair.
June 22, 2021
Thank you so much for your correction. Have a nice day!
June 23, 2021
No problem, I enjoyed the fairy tale! You have a nice day too!
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Fairy Tale" Urashima Taro" Fairy Tale |
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Long ago, there is a man who named Urashima Taro. Long ago, there "who was named" is another correct way to say it. |
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One day, he saw that children bullied a turtle and he saved it. One day, he saw |
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The turtle appreciated to Taro and took him to Ryugu Castle in the sea as his in return. The turtle |
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In Ryugu Castle, there is a beautiful princess whose name is Otohime and she was very hospitable to Taro. In Ryugu Castle, there |
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He had been enjoying and spent a wonderful time with her. He had been enjoying himself and spent a wonderful time with her. |
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But he told her that he would like to return to his town. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, Otohime gave him a "Urashima's Casket" and noticed him not to open it. Then, Otohime gave him a "Urashima's Casket" and |
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When he got on the ground, there was no house which used be there and nobody lived he knew. When he got |
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He looked over everywhere and asked people and found out that it has past outrageous time during he was in Ryugu Castle. He looked |
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Furthermore, he forgot Otohime's warning and opened "Urashima's Casket". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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White smoke came up inside of it and he suddenly became an old man with full of wrinkles and white hair. White smoke came up from inside of it and he suddenly became an old man with |
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