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Blossom

Dec. 19, 2023

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Faim

Aujourd’hui j’ai faim. Je vais à la boulangerie.

J’achète deux croissants. Je mangé des croissants. Je n’ai pas faim maintenant.

Après je mangé, je vais au supermarché. Je veux des fruits. J’achète beaucoup de fruits. J’adore les fruits. J’ai faim encore!

Corrections

Faim

Aujourd’hui j’ai faim.

Je vais à la boulangerie.

J’achète deux croissants.

[Je mangée/J'ai mangé ?] des croissants.

"je mange" (I'm eating) or "j'ai mangé" (I ate)?

Je n’ai palus faim maintenant.

Plus = not anymore

Après jeavoir mangé, je vais au supermarché.

"aller" and "manger" have the same subject => infinitive structure = avoir mangé
This is a past infinitive, since the action of eating is achieved when you go to the supermarket

Je veux des fruits.

J’achète beaucoup de fruits.

J’adore les fruits.

J’ai faim encore faim !

Feedback

It was a bit unclear to me whether you wanted to write this in the past or in the present (historical present); in the former case, let me know and I'll apply the appropriate corrections.

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Blossom

Dec. 19, 2023

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Honestly I don’t know 😅. I’m at a very beginner level of French so I just wanted to practice putting words I know into sentences, so I don’t know much about tenses. Thank you so much for your corrections!

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Monsieur_Elephant

Dec. 19, 2023

5

I see! Well, for a beginner, it looks like you can handle yourself! The present forms you wrote we're almost perfect. It's good to start with the present and then go on with the main past tenses which are the imparfait and the passé composé (like "j'ai mangé")

Just remember French has no distinction between continuous present and simple present, from a purely verbal point of view. "Je travaille" can be "I'm working" (right now) or "I work" (as a general fact).

Faim


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Aujourd’hui j’ai faim.


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Je vais à la boulangerie.


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J’achète deux croissants.


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Je mangé des croissants.


[Je mangée/J'ai mangé ?] des croissants.

"je mange" (I'm eating) or "j'ai mangé" (I ate)?

Je n’ai pas faim maintenant.


Je n’ai palus faim maintenant.

Plus = not anymore

Après je mangé, je vais au supermarché.


Après jeavoir mangé, je vais au supermarché.

"aller" and "manger" have the same subject => infinitive structure = avoir mangé This is a past infinitive, since the action of eating is achieved when you go to the supermarket

Je veux des fruits.


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J’achète beaucoup de fruits.


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J’adore les fruits.


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J’ai faim encore!


J’ai faim encore faim !

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