May 31, 2020
Fading Seasons
Nowadays, artificial objects blur the changes of season. Flowers blooms regardless of its season, and vegetables and fruits always appear on our dining table whenever we want. How monotonous the world becomes! (but I love those vegetables and fruits.)
今の世では、自然の季節に人工的な装飾が施されている。私たちの周囲では花が季節に先立って咲き、以前は季節季節に限られていた野菜や果物がいつでも食卓を飾っている。季節感がそがれる世の中である。
Fading Seasons
Nowadays, artificial objects blur the changes of season.
Flowers blooms regardless of itstheir season, and vegetables and fruits always appear on our dining table whenever we want.
How monotonous the world becomes!
(but I love those vegetables and fruits.)
June 2, 2020
thank you!!
Fading Seasons
Nowadays, artificial objects blur the changesing of the seasons.
This sounds more natural.
Flowers blooms regardless of its season, and vegetables and fruits always appear on our dining table whenever we want.
How monotonous the world has becomes!
Your sentence wasn't incorrect, this just sounds more natural :)
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Your writing is good! I agree, but still I only eat fruit that's in season because they taste better 😋
May 31, 2020
I don't know the reason but yes, those fruits always tastes better! thank you !
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Nowadays, artificial objects blur the changes of season. Nowadays, artificial objects blur the chang This sounds more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Flowers blooms regardless of its season, and vegetables and fruits always appear on our dining table whenever we want. Flowers bloom Flowers bloom |
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How monotonous the world becomes! How monotonous the world has become Your sentence wasn't incorrect, this just sounds more natural :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(but I love those vegetables and fruits.) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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