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Scarlett_Father

March 12, 2024

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Yesterday afternoon, I was at a church gathering. While the host was organizing the meeting, others discussed eternal life, and I couldn't understand most of them. An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with beautiful tone. He looked like an elder stateman in a Youtube video I had watched before.

After the meeting, I inquired with someone I knew whether the two men were the same, and I sent the video link at the same time. My friend informed me they were different, suggesting that my inability of distinguish might due to I haven't seen thousands of North American people. Both men actually share the same hair style and head shape. I am a bit face-blind to them.

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Yesterday afternoon, I was at a church gathering.

While the host was organizing the meeting, others discussed eternal life, and I couldn't understand most of them.

An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with a beautiful tone.

He looked like an elder stateman in a Youtube video which I had watched before.

After the meeting, I inquired with someone, I didn't kneow whether the two men were the same, and so to clarify it, I sent the video link ato the same timeperson.

My friend informed me that they were different, suggesting that my inability of distinguish might due tohave been because I haven't seen thousands of North American people.

Both men actually share the same hair style and head shape.

I am a bit face-blind to them.

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Scarlett_Father

March 12, 2024

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Thank you for your help.

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Yesterday afternoon, I was at a church gathering.

While the host was organizing the meeting, others discussed eternal life, and I couldn't understand most of them conversation.

An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with beautiful tone.

He looked like an elder statesman in a YoutTube video I had watched before.

After the meeting, I inquired withasked someone I knew whether the two men were the same, and I sent the video link at the same timeover.

My friend informed me they weare different, people, further suggesting that my inability tof distinguish might due to I haven't seen thousands ofthem may be due my lack of exposure to North American people.

Both men actually share the same hair style and head shape.

I am a bit face-blind to them.

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Scarlett_Father

March 12, 2024

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Thank you very much! :-)

Yesterday afternoon, I was at a church gathering.

While the host was organizing the meeting, others discussed eternal life, and I couldn't understand most of them.

An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with a beautiful tone.

He looked like an elder statesman in a YoutTube video I hadrecently watched before.

After the meeting, I inquired withasked someone I knew whether the two men were the same, and I sent the video link at the same time.

My friend informed me they were two different people, suggesting that my inability of distinguish might due to the fact that I haven't seen thousands of North American people.

Both men actually sharve the same hair style and head shape.

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Scarlett_Father

March 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections! 🙏

Yesterday afternoon, I was at a church gathering.

An elegant man sat ton my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with a beautiful tone.

no need to say "hand side"

He looked like an elder statesman in a YoutTube video I had watched before.

original is okay except for spelling but sounds more natural without "had" here

After the meeting, I inquired withasked someone I knew whether the two men were the same person, and I sent the video link at the same time.

"Inquired" is not the best option since it's too formal and sounds very weird

My friend informed me they were different, suggesting that my inability tof distinguish between them might be due to I haven't seen thousands ofme not seeing enough North American people.

"inability to" + do something is always "inability to X"
only say "inability of" if you are talking about a person's inability

"(not) thousands of North American people" is an odd choice, not sure what your native language is but it's not an expression English speakers would use to convey the message of "not enough"

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The text reads very formal, like a novel or other piece of literature. If you want more casual everyday/realistic speech I can show you more natural ways of expressing the same thing. Keep it up! :)

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Scarlett_Father

March 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and suggestions. 🫶

He looked like an elder stateman in a Youtube video I had watched before.


He looked like an elder statesman in a YoutTube video I had watched before.

original is okay except for spelling but sounds more natural without "had" here

He looked like an elder statesman in a YoutTube video I hadrecently watched before.

He looked like an elder statesman in a YoutTube video I had watched before.

He looked like an elder stateman in a Youtube video which I had watched before.

After the meeting, I inquired with someone I knew whether the two men were the same, and I sent the video link at the same time.


After the meeting, I inquired withasked someone I knew whether the two men were the same person, and I sent the video link at the same time.

"Inquired" is not the best option since it's too formal and sounds very weird

After the meeting, I inquired withasked someone I knew whether the two men were the same, and I sent the video link at the same time.

After the meeting, I inquired withasked someone I knew whether the two men were the same, and I sent the video link at the same timeover.

After the meeting, I inquired with someone, I didn't kneow whether the two men were the same, and so to clarify it, I sent the video link ato the same timeperson.

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While the host was organizing the meeting, others discussed eternal life, and I couldn't understand most of them.


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An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with beautiful tone.


An elegant man sat ton my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with a beautiful tone.

no need to say "hand side"

An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with a beautiful tone.

An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with beautiful tone.

An elegant man sat to my right hand side; he spoke with the host at a proper pace with a beautiful tone.

My friend informed me they were different, suggesting that my inability of distinguish might due to I haven't seen thousands of North American people.


My friend informed me they were different, suggesting that my inability tof distinguish between them might be due to I haven't seen thousands ofme not seeing enough North American people.

"inability to" + do something is always "inability to X" only say "inability of" if you are talking about a person's inability "(not) thousands of North American people" is an odd choice, not sure what your native language is but it's not an expression English speakers would use to convey the message of "not enough"

My friend informed me they were two different people, suggesting that my inability of distinguish might due to the fact that I haven't seen thousands of North American people.

My friend informed me they weare different, people, further suggesting that my inability tof distinguish might due to I haven't seen thousands ofthem may be due my lack of exposure to North American people.

My friend informed me that they were different, suggesting that my inability of distinguish might due tohave been because I haven't seen thousands of North American people.

Both men actually share the same hair style and head shape.


Both men actually sharve the same hair style and head shape.

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I am a bit face-blind to them.


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