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April 7, 2023

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


A: What's your favorite manga?
B: Fullmetal Alchemist
A: I like it, too! But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly. Who's your favorite character?
B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.
A: Oh, shit. What kind of guy was he? LOL.
B: No way!
A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds.
B: Okay.
A: Ahh, okay, okay. The one that turns black, right?
B: Yeah, yeah, lol.
A: The one who got beaten up by King Bradley, right?
B: Yeah, yeah, lol.
A: I loved that scene. Why's that character your favorite?
B: Well, his way of life.
A: Oh, i see, I kinda feel you.
Btw, what was that why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

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FAullmetal Alchemist

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, p. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

A: What's your favorite manga?

B: Fullmetal Alchemist.

A: I like it, too!

But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly.

Who's your favorite character?

B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.

A: Oh, shit.

What kind of guy was he?

LOL.

B: No way!

A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds.

B: Okay.

A: Ahh, okay, okay.

The one that turns black, right?

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.

A: The one who got beaten up by King Bradley, right?

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.

A: I loved that scene.

Why's that character your favorite?

B: Well, his way of life.

また、
Well, because of the way he lives.

A: Oh, i see, I kinda feel you.

Btw, what was that, why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

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sho

April 10, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!

FA

What is this?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you'd find in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

A: What's your favorite manga?

B: Fullmetal Alchemist

A: I like it, too!

But I read it when I was in about Jr high schooljunior high, so I wonder if I remember it correctly.

Who's your favorite character?

B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.

A: Oh, shit.

What kind of guy was he?

LOL.

This response here doesn't really make sense in the context of the conversation, unless they're texting each other.

B: No way!

A: Hold on, give me 10 secondsa minute.

B: Okay.

A: Ahh, okay, okay.

The one that turnsed black, right?

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.

A: The one who got beaten up by King Bradley, right?

B: Yeah, yeah, lol.

A: I loved that scene.

Why's that character your favorite?

B: Well, his way of life.

A: Oh, i see, I kinda feel you.

Btw, what1) why was it that 2) why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

Choose 1) why was it that he fused into ...
or 2) why did he fuse into ...

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sho

April 10, 2023

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Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️

A: I like it, too!


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FAullmetal Alchemist

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you'd find in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇‍♂️

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, p. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇‍♂️

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


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But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly.


But I read it when I was in about Jr high schooljunior high, so I wonder if I remember it correctly.

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Who's your favorite character?


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B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.


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A: Oh, shit.


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What kind of guy was he?


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LOL.


LOL.

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B: No way!


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A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds.


A: Hold on, give me 10 secondsa minute.

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B: Okay.


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A: Ahh, okay, okay.


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The one that turns black, right?


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B: Yeah, yeah, lol.


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A: The one who got beaten up by King Bradley, right?


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B: Yeah, yeah, lol.


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A: I loved that scene.


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Why's that character your favorite?


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B: Well, his way of life.


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B: Well, his way of life.

また、 Well, because of the way he lives.

A: Oh, i see, I kinda feel you.


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Btw, what was that why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?


Btw, what1) why was it that 2) why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

Choose 1) why was it that he fused into ... or 2) why did he fuse into ...

Btw, what was that, why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?

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