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A & B Talk72

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: Do you use a ticket?
B: Yes, but there is no place to put ticket.
A: Really? Let's go there together.
B: Thanks.
A: Oh, I see. I think you couldn't get through because you used the one for IC cards only. I think you can go through here.
B: Is there any way to tell the difference?
A: I have never paid attention to it before, but if there is a sign that says "IC" somewhere like this, it might be for IC cards only. If there is no sign, or if it says "ticket" somewhere, I think you can put in a ticket.
B: I see. Then may I go through here?
A: Sure.
B: Oh, okay. Nice.
A: Good for you. Have a nice day!
B: Thank you so much!

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A & B Talk72

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Really?

Let's go there together.

B: Thanks.

A: Oh, I see.

I think you couldn't get through because you used the one for IC cards only.

B: Is there any way to tell the difference?

B: I see.

Then may I go through here?

A: Sure.

B: Oh, okay.

Nice.

A: Good for you.

Have a nice day!

B: Thank you so much!

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July 14, 2022

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A: I ha I've never paid attention to it before, but if there i's a sign that says "IC" somewhere like this, it might be for IC cards only.

ๆ—ฅๆœฌใซ่กŒใฃใŸๆ™‚ใ€ๆ—ฅๆœฌ่ชžใŒไธŠๆ‰‹ใ˜ใ‚ƒใชใ‹ใฃใŸใงใ™ใŒใ€ใพใ ็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ๅคงใใ็ท‘ใฎ่‰ฒใฎใ€ŒICใ€ใฎๆ–‡ๅญ—ใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚

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B: Thanks.


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A: Oh, I see.


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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If there is no sign, or if it says "ticket" somewhere, I think you can put in a ticket.


If there is no sign, or if it says "ticket" somewhere, I think you can put inuse a ticket. If there is no sign, or if it says "ticket" somewhere, I think you can use a ticket.

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A & B Talk72


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?


B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to dohow? B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know how?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Do you use a ticket?


A: Doid you use a ticket? A: Did you use a ticket?

It's past tense.

B: Yes, but there is no place to put ticket.


B: Yes, but there is no placn't anywhere to put a ticket. B: Yes, but there isn't anywhere to put a ticket.

A: Really?


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Let's go there together.


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I think you couldn't get through because you used the one for IC cards only.


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I think you can go through here.


I think you can go through herthis one. I think you can go through this one.

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B: Is there any way to tell the difference?


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A: I have never paid attention to it before, but if there is a sign that says "IC" somewhere like this, it might be for IC cards only.


A: I ha I've never paid attention to it before, but if there i's a sign that says "IC" somewhere like this, it might be for IC cards only. A: I've never paid attention to it before, but if there's a sign that says "IC" somewhere like this, it might be for IC cards only.

ๆ—ฅๆœฌใซ่กŒใฃใŸๆ™‚ใ€ๆ—ฅๆœฌ่ชžใŒไธŠๆ‰‹ใ˜ใ‚ƒใชใ‹ใฃใŸใงใ™ใŒใ€ใพใ ็Ÿฅใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚ๅคงใใ็ท‘ใฎ่‰ฒใฎใ€ŒICใ€ใฎๆ–‡ๅญ—ใŒใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚

B: I see.


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Then may I go through here?


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A: Sure.


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B: Oh, okay.


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Nice.


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A: Good for you.


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Have a nice day!


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B: Thank you so much!


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