Oct. 28, 2022
Superpower
If I could have a superpower, then the ability to reach where I want to go immediately is what I want most.
I don't like spending time traveling from one place to another. Now my commute time is 20 minutes on foot, which is Okay for me.
如果我能拥有一项超能力的话，我希望自己能瞬间移动。
我不喜欢在路途上花费太多时间。现在我上班的通勤时间是20分钟（步行），我觉得还不错。
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Superpower
If I could have a superpower, then the ability to reach where I want to go immediatemove to any destination instantaneously is what I would want most.
If I could have a superpower, then the ability to move to any destination instantaneously is what I would want most.
I don't like spending time traveling from one place to another.
NowCurrently, my commute time is 20 minutes on foot, which is Okayfine for me.
Currently, my commute is 20 minutes on foot, which is fine for me.
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Twenty minutes of walking sounds like a nice distance.
Oct. 30, 2022
Thank you for the corrections!
If I could have a superpower, then I would most want the ability to reach where I want to go immediately is what I want most.
If I could have a superpower, then I would most want the ability to reach where I want to go immediately.
Now myMy current commute time is 20 minutes on footf walking, which is Ookay for me.
My current commute time is 20 minutes of walking, which is okay for me.
Oct. 30, 2022
Thank you for correcting my journal!
If I could have a superpower, then I would want the ability to reach where I want to go immediately is what I wantthe most.
If I could have a superpower, then I would want the ability to reach where I want to go immediately the most.
NowCurrently, my commute time is 20 minutes on foot, which is Okayfine for me.
Currently, my commute is 20 minutes on foot, which is fine for me.
I think it is better to use "fine", however, I'm sure many native speakers would say "okay" too.
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Great job! Keep up the good work!
Oct. 30, 2022
Thank you very much!
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If I could have a superpower, then the ability to reach where I want to go immediately is what I want most.
If I could have a superpower, then I would want the ability to reach where I want to go immediately
If I could have a superpower, then I would most want the ability to reach where I want to go immediately
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I don't like spending time traveling from one place to another. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now my commute time is 20 minutes on foot, which is Okay for me.
I think it is better to use "fine", however, I'm sure many native speakers would say "okay" too.
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如果我能拥有一项超能力的话，我希望自己能瞬间移动。 |
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我不喜欢在路途上花费太多时间。现在我上班的通勤时间是20分钟（步行），我觉得还不错。 |
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