Aug. 24, 2025
Im ceren from turkiye. I just graduate form highshool. I Will go to university and my department is english they Will teach in one year but ı dont want to be forced and ofcorse ı want to be a watch films and series with no subtitels. Anyway ı have to contiune talk about myself. In highschool i was math and turkish student. In turkiye we separate from math and sciene , like me math and turkısh , social sciences students and language students . After that part we to enter a univesaty exam this is realy realy so Hard if you have time you have to be take o look . Some subjects Another countries students are learn in üniversity but we learn in highscool only sixteen or seventeen years old. This is long story ours educatian its not going well. Our economy is not going well too but education is more more important than economy becase this fixing is too much Hard. I Got into different topics. Actually ı want to talk about my own university departmant but i tired . Next time ım gonna explation with details.
I'm cCeren from tTurkiye.
I'm Ceren from Turkiye.
"I'm" is a contraction, it means "I am" but is shortened to one word. You would also capitalise your name and the country you're from.
I just graduated forom highshool.
I just graduated from highshool.
"graduate" is an action. "graduated" means that you did that action in the past. Minor spelling mistake with "from".
I Willam going to go to university and my department is eto study English t. They Wwill teach in one year, but ıI don't want to be forced, and ofcorse ıI want to be a watch films and series with no subtiteles.
I am going to go to university to study English. They will teach in one year, but I don't want to be forced, and I want to watch films and series with no subtitles.
It isn't necessary to capitalise "will" unless it is referring to someone's name. As a name, "Will" is a shortened version of the name "William".
I don't know if you meant to say that you're going to go to university in one year, or if you're trying to say that you will study English for one year.
Small spelling error with "subtitles".
Anyway ı, I have to contiunenue to talk about myself.
Anyway, I have to continue to talk about myself.
Just a minor spelling mistake. You could also say, "I am going to continue talking about myself." or "I have to continue talking about myself."
In highschool i, I was a math and tTurkish student.
In highschool, I was a math and Turkish student.
"I" should be capitalised. You could also say, "In highschool, I studied math and Turkish."
In tTurkiye we separate from math and sciene , like mece. I studied math and tTurkısh , while other students studied social sciences students and language students .
In Turkiye we separate math and science. I studied math and Turkısh, while other students studied social sciences and language.
I'm not sure what the last part of the sentence is meant to mean. Sorry if it's not what you intended for it to say.
After that part, we to enter a univesarsity exam t. This is realyly, really so Hhard. if you have time, you have to beshould take oa look .
After that part, we enter a university exam. This is really, really hard. if you have time, you should take a look.
Just a few spelling errors and some punctuation.
Some subjects Anstudents from other countries students are learn in üuniversity, but we learn in highschool at only sixteen or seventeen years old.
Some subjects students from other countries learn in university, but we learn in highschool at only sixteen or seventeen years old.
You could also say "Some of the subjects we learn in highschool at sixteen or seventeen years old are only taught to students from other countries in university."
This isIt's a long story o. Ours educatiaon its not going well.
It's a long story. Our education is not going well.
Our economy is not going well tooeither, but education is moreuch more important than economy because this fixing it is too much Hhard.
Our economy is not going well either, but education is much more important than economy because fixing it is too hard.
"Our economy is not going well too" will be understood, but it's better to say "either" rather than "too" in this sentence.
"too much hard" could be changed to "difficult".
I Ggot into different topics.
I got into different topics.
"got" doesn't need to be capitalised.
AI actually ı want to talk about my own university departmaent, but iI'm tired .
I actually want to talk about my own university department, but I'm tired.
Next time ı, I'm gonna explatioin with more details.
Next time, I'm gonna explain with more details.
"gonna" works fine, you could also say "going to" if you want to sound more professional.
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I hope my suggestions make sense to you. You're doing great!!
I will talk about myself. I will talk about myself.
I'm cCeren from tuTürkiye.
I'm Ceren from Türkiye.
I just graduated forom highs school.
I just graduated from high school.
Past tense. Spelling. High school is two words. That said, this is a common native mistake as well though.
I Wwill go to university and my department is ewill be English t. They Wwill teach in it in one year, but ıI don't want to be forced and ofto study. Of course ı, I also want to be able to watch films and series with no subtiteles.
I will go to university and my department will be English. They will teach in it in one year, but I don't want to be forced to study. Of course, I also want to be able to watch films and series with no subtitles.
Some spelling, capitalization and sentence structure tweaks.
Anyway ıs, I have to contiunue talking about myself.
Anyways, I have to continue talking about myself.
In high school i, I was a math and tTurkish student.
In high school, I was a math and Turkish student.
I am not sure what
In tuTürkiye, we separate from math and sciene , like meocial sciences. For example, I am in math and tTurkısh , social sciences students and language students .ish.
In Türkiye, we separate math and social sciences. For example, I am in math and Turkish.
I took some liberty here because the sentence was confusing. I think you are saying that the departments are divided up, but it seems like it was being said twice?
After that part we to enter, we take a univesarsity exam t. This is realyly, really so Hard ihard. If you have time, you have to be take oa look .
After that, we take a university exam. This is really, really hard. If you have time, you have to take a look .
This reads a little stiff, but I tried to keep it close to the original sentence.
Some subjects Another countriey's students are learn in üuniversity, but we only learn in high school until we are only sixteen or seventeen years old.
Some subjects other country's students learn in university, but we only learn in high school until we are only sixteen or seventeen years old.
This is lLong story short, ours educatiaon its not going well.
Long story short, our education is not going well.
Our economy is not going well too, but education is more more important than economy because this fixing it is too much Hhard.
Our economy is not going well too, but education is more more important than economy because fixing it is too hard.
I Ggot into different topicsa little sidetracked.
I got a little sidetracked.
Shorter, more natural sounding way to say the same thing.
AI actually ı wanted to talk about my own university departmaent, but iI am tired .
I actually wanted to talk about my own university department, but I am tired .
Next time ım gonna, I'll explatioin with more details.
Next time, I'll explain with more details.
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Only a couple of sentences were too confusing to make out for sure. But overall, I understood what you were saying. Keep working on spelling and proper capitalization. I think you did pretty good for a beginner!
I tTalk aAbout mMyself
I Talk About Myself
Be sure to capitalize your titles for professionalism's sake.
I'm cCeren from tTurkiye.
I'm Ceren from Turkiye.
Add an apostrophe when trying to make a phrase (e.g. "I am") into something shorter (e.g. "I'm"), if you can. Also, capitalize names like your given one and that of your country.
I just graduated forom highs school.
I just graduated from high school.
Here, I fixed a bit of your spelling to clarify that this action happened in the recent past.
I Wwill go to university, and my department is eEnglish t. They Wwill teach it in one year, but ıI don't want to be forced and ofto study. Of course ı, I want to be able to watch films and series with no subtiteles.
I will go to university, and my department is English. They will teach it in one year, but I don't want to be forced to study. Of course, I want to be able to watch films and series with no subtitles.
I added "to study" because I assumed that's what you meant to write first when talking about not being forced to do something in your department or major. Apart from this, you just had some minor spelling, punctuation, grammar, and capitalization errors.
Anyway ı, I have to contiunue talking about myself.
Anyway, I have to continue talking about myself.
Capitalization and punctuation errors aside, I think you should look into compound verbs (e.g. [Verb 1] [Verb 2]-ing) and see how different types of them can be used; I bet the sources you'll find in this respect will be much better than any explanation I could give.
In high school is, I was a math and tTurkish student.
In high school, I was a math and Turkish student.
I just fixed some punctuation, spacing, and capitalization errors here to make this sentence more readable.
In tTurkiye, we separate from math and science , like me with math and tTurkısh , social sciences students, and language students .
In Turkiye, we separate from math and science, like me with math and Turkısh, social sciences students, and language students.
Even with the corrections I've made, I'm not completely sure what you mean here. Do you mean that Turkish students major in separate fields like math, science, social science, and languages even in high school?
After that part, we have to enter a univesarsity exam t. This is realyly, really so Hard ihard. If you have time, you have to be take oa look .
After that part, we have to enter a university exam. This is really, really hard. If you have time, you have to take a look.
I don't think you have to add in "so" if you already have an emphatic phrase like "really, really" in place. I assume my other corrections can also make this sentence clearer.
Some subjects Another countries are learnOther countries learn some subjects in üuniversity, but we learn them in high school at only sixteen or seventeen years old.
Other countries learn some subjects in university, but we learn them in high school at only sixteen or seventeen years old.
I just think my rearranging and additions make this sentence easier to understand.
This is a long story, but ours educatiaon its not going well.
This is a long story, but our education is not going well.
You could also say "Long story short" instead of "This is a long story," like what I've written here.
Our economy is not going well too, either, but education is more more important than the economy because this fixing is too much Hhard.
Our economy is not going well, either, but education is more important than the economy because this fixing is too hard.
If something is also going negatively in comparison to something else, use "either" instead of "too." The other deletions and additions I made should hopefully make this sentence easier to read.
I Ggot into different topics. I actually ı wanted to talk about my own university departmaent, but iI'm tired n. Next time ı, I'll explatioin with details.
I got into different topics. I actually wanted to talk about my own university department, but I'm tired. Next time, I'll explain with details.
If there are contrasting topics within one sentence that you're trying to write, you can just split them up like I've done.
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Congrats on graduating from high school! I hope university life will treat you well!
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I talk about myself
I Be sure to capitalize your titles for professionalism's sake. I will talk about myself. I will talk about myself. |
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Im ceren from turkiye.
I'm Add an apostrophe when trying to make a phrase (e.g. "I am") into something shorter (e.g. "I'm"), if you can. Also, capitalize names like your given one and that of your country.
I'm
I'm "I'm" is a contraction, it means "I am" but is shortened to one word. You would also capitalise your name and the country you're from. |
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I just graduate form highshool.
I just graduated f Here, I fixed a bit of your spelling to clarify that this action happened in the recent past.
I just graduated f Past tense. Spelling. High school is two words. That said, this is a common native mistake as well though.
I just graduated f "graduate" is an action. "graduated" means that you did that action in the past. Minor spelling mistake with "from". |
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I Will go to university and my department is english they Will teach in one year but ı dont want to be forced and ofcorse ı want to be a watch films and series with no subtitels.
I I added "to study" because I assumed that's what you meant to write first when talking about not being forced to do something in your department or major. Apart from this, you just had some minor spelling, punctuation, grammar, and capitalization errors.
I Some spelling, capitalization and sentence structure tweaks.
I It isn't necessary to capitalise "will" unless it is referring to someone's name. As a name, "Will" is a shortened version of the name "William". I don't know if you meant to say that you're going to go to university in one year, or if you're trying to say that you will study English for one year. Small spelling error with "subtitles". |
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In turkiye we separate from math and sciene , like me math and turkısh , social sciences students and language students .
In Even with the corrections I've made, I'm not completely sure what you mean here. Do you mean that Turkish students major in separate fields like math, science, social science, and languages even in high school?
In I took some liberty here because the sentence was confusing. I think you are saying that the departments are divided up, but it seems like it was being said twice?
In I'm not sure what the last part of the sentence is meant to mean. Sorry if it's not what you intended for it to say. |
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In highschool i was math and turkish student.
In high school I am not sure what
In highschool "I" should be capitalised. You could also say, "In highschool, I studied math and Turkish." |
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Some subjects Another countries students are learn in üniversity but we learn in highscool only sixteen or seventeen years old.
Some subjects
Some subjects You could also say "Some of the subjects we learn in highschool at sixteen or seventeen years old are only taught to students from other countries in university." |
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I Got into different topics.
I Shorter, more natural sounding way to say the same thing.
I "got" doesn't need to be capitalised. |
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Actually ı want to talk about my own university departmant but i tired .
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Next time ım gonna explation with details.
Next time
Next time "gonna" works fine, you could also say "going to" if you want to sound more professional. |
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Anyway ı have to contiune talk about myself.
Anyway Capitalization and punctuation errors aside, I think you should look into compound verbs (e.g. [Verb 1] [Verb 2]-ing) and see how different types of them can be used; I bet the sources you'll find in this respect will be much better than any explanation I could give.
Anyway
Anyway Just a minor spelling mistake. You could also say, "I am going to continue talking about myself." or "I have to continue talking about myself." |
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In highschool is was math and turkish student.
In high school I just fixed some punctuation, spacing, and capitalization errors here to make this sentence more readable. |
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After that part we to enter a univesaty exam this is realy realy so Hard if you have time you have to be take o look .
After that part, we have to enter a unive I don't think you have to add in "so" if you already have an emphatic phrase like "really, really" in place. I assume my other corrections can also make this sentence clearer.
After that This reads a little stiff, but I tried to keep it close to the original sentence.
After that part, we Just a few spelling errors and some punctuation. |
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This is long story ours educatian its not going well.
This is a long story, but our You could also say "Long story short" instead of "This is a long story," like what I've written here.
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Our economy is not going well too but education is more more important than economy becase this fixing is too much Hard.
Our economy is not going well If something is also going negatively in comparison to something else, use "either" instead of "too." The other deletions and additions I made should hopefully make this sentence easier to read.
Our economy is not going well too, but education is more more important than economy because
Our economy is not going well "Our economy is not going well too" will be understood, but it's better to say "either" rather than "too" in this sentence. "too much hard" could be changed to "difficult". |
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Some subjects Another countries are learn in üniversity but we learn in highscool only sixteen or seventeen years old.
I just think my rearranging and additions make this sentence easier to understand. |
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I Got into different topics actually ı want to talk about my own university departmant but i tired next time ı explation with details.
I If there are contrasting topics within one sentence that you're trying to write, you can just split them up like I've done. |
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