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May 23, 2020

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Explosion Of Anger

Finally, my anger exploded today. I could not control myself somehow.

Simply speaking, my boyfriend who lives together doesn't do the housework at all and he just plays game or sleeps. It seems like I am a housekeeper.

Usually, I tend to suppress my feelings and emotions if I take something awful.
But, it piles up unknowingly and it explodes. And, I start hating myself at the same time.

Which do you think better that you spit out every happen or you control yourself on the spot and explode latter?
I know that staying peace is the best, though.

Tomorrow will be a sunny day, so hopefully I want to be in a good mood like the sun;)

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Explosion Of Anger

Finally, my anger exploded today.

I could not control myself somehow.

It seems like I am a housekeeper.

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May 26, 2020

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Explosion Of Anger

Finally, my anger exploded today.

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Explosion Of Anger


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Finally, my anger exploded today.


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We would not really say our 'ange'r exploded, rather we tend to say 'I exploded' or 'I just exploded'.

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I could not control myself somehow.


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Simply speaking, my boyfriend who lives together doesn't do the housework at all and he just plays game or sleeps.


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I think "simply speaking" is fine!

It seems like I am a housekeeper.


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Usually, I tend to suppress my feelings and emotions if I take something awful.


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But, it piles up unknowingly and it explodes.


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And, I start hating myself at the same time.


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Which do you think better that you spit out every happen or you control yourself on the spot and explode latter?


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Which do you think is better, that youo spit out everyyour anger every time something happens or youto control yourself on the spot and explode latter? Which do you think is better, to spit out your anger every time something happens or to control yourself on the spot and explode later?

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I know that staying peace is the best, though.


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I know that staying peacecalm is the best, though. I know that staying calm is the best, though.

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I know that staying peacecalm is the best, though. I know that staying calm is the best, though.

Tomorrow will be a sunny day, so hopefully I want to be in a good mood like the sun;)


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You can actually use 'sunny' to mean 'happy/cheerful' as well! So you could say: Tomorrow will be a sunny day, so hopefully I will be in a sunny mood ;)

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